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c0c6a No.4340[View All]

Hello.

To mark a fresh start, I start a new chat thread here for Impregnator Kings.

Let's all be civil and promote healthy discussion. I will check this thread to answer questions gather feedback address concerns and ask for opinions.

Thank you. I hope the story is enjoyable.
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784d7 No.5803

Hello everyone.

I have a quick question for you all.

In the previous weeks since we started having the updates be on a time-skip, I gave these scenes individual titles.

In the current week, I've been eschewing that in favor of a more stream-of-consciousness style where Edward is making decisions over scenes that are chronological but not given a set time/order.

Do you prefer one over the other?

Have you not noticed?

Is one more distracting?

My thoughts are the titles and compartmentalizing of the scenes is good for organizing, but distracting both for the reader and the writer and that it's better to just write the scenes as they come. On the other hand, is that too hard to keep track of?

Let me know if you have any thoughts.

Please continue to vote.

I hope the story is enjoyable to you all so far. Thank you for writing it with me.

8addb No.5804

I think that having it be title-less scenes is alright, since it adds a bit of mystery to what may happen.

Well, with the idea of a witch's party, is there really any rules that would restrict us from attending? I understand this is a witch's party, but I do not believe it has been stated that there is a rule that a witch's husband can not come with her.

47145 No.5806

The "stream" feels more natural and less like going through the checklist used to decide stuff for the week. I like it better that way since it´s an opportunity to show scenes that aren´t results of our votes but Edwards character and voted on short term goals.

Regarding the Witch party maybe "show" it as told by Beatrice and Tharja after it ends. When I suggested it I wanted more of the womens perspectives - ergo without a man present or a major topic. Edward is almost never not the center of the story due to the format. That isn´t bad but a few scenes with different perspectives could be a nice addition to the story.

47145 No.5807

The "stream" feels more natural and less like going through the checklist used to decide stuff for the week. I like it better that way since it´s an opportunity to show scenes that aren´t results of our votes but Edwards character and voted on short term goals.

ee1a2 No.5808

>>5804

The Witch in questions husband would not only have no place to sit, but also violate the strict tradition of a Proper Witches' party having One host and twelve guests. The host doesn't receive a seat, she is expected to mingle; and the other twelve seats are meant for twelve other Witches.

ee1a2 No.5888

Quick question. Is anyone else put off by the horde of anonymous users promoting the "submissive" option? We've had Edward be submissive to Beatrice before, so going down this track would, I feel, be just another re-hash of the same thing, and turn what could be an interesting and unique experience into a stale and unsatisfying one.

bba77 No.5889

>>5888
Everyone has a right to their one vote, whether it's their first vote, their 100th vote, or their only vote ever. There will never be a qualifier on someone's right to vote, other than that they vote only once.

That said, I did feel like another foot-focus scene would be re-hashing the last scene too much at this point, and so that option was deliberately excluded this time. If the Beatrice-being-dominant sex option wins here, I will similarly exclude that from options for future sex scenes with Beatrice. At least for a while. Until I feel enough time has passed and I have confidence I can make the idea interesting again.

The vote is still open. I will give it a little longer before I close it.

I hope it's enjoyable.

bba77 No.5912

Hello everyone.

It was a very close vote for the nature of the latest sex scene. For all the people who voted "dominate Beatrice," I want to say: please do not feel disappointed that, in the end, 'submit' won. There will definitely be a dominance-oriented sex-scene with Beatrice in the future. (I'm quite certain those interested in the breast-play/oral will get their turn too.)

I am glad to see it was a very healthy vote. I hope everyone looks forward to the update. It should take a day or two to write. Please look forward to the update then.

I hope it's enjoyable.

26f08 No.5913

>>5912
>There will definitely be a dominance-oriented sex-scene with Beatrice in the future.
Which is fine with me because the next sex scene with Beatrice is most likely the one in the next week when Edward attempts to knock her up again. Knocking her up while she's tied up or something will be a very enjoyable scene for me at least.

75bef No.5914

>>5888

It's not a horde of anonymous users, it's clearly someone manipulating the votes using different IPs, as the last bit in the main thread showed them screwing up.

37af2 No.5915

do you guys have enough tin-foil hats for everyone in the Clan? because it appears the last vote was as rigged as a genuine American 'democratic' process. We didn't really want to buy into Scientist's 'conspiracy theory,' (seriously, who bothers with this kind of thing - vote rigging a CYOA - on pregchan of all places?) but it seems he was on to something, as the most recent anon pointed out as well there were obvious issues towards the end of the vote with poster IDs.

bba77 No.5916

>>5914
I don't know if this is possible, but…

If it were true, I'd think the votes would be more closely packed together. With the exception of the one vote which was clearly an error and not counted, there's no entire block of votes coming in all at once, which is how I would imagine a sudden person trying to get more than one vote would work.

Let me say, unless there is overwhelming evidence of manipulation, I must count the vote as what it is. Furthermore, I like to think I can trust the readers to follow the system of one person = one vote. If there is a person reading this who ever considered voting more than once or actually did so, my personal appeal is this: please don't. It's just not fair. The story is not just written by me. It's written by everyone, and everyone must have their one vote.

Thank you. Update will come later.

Look forward to it.

bba77 No.5948

Hello everyone.

Apologies, but I've been struck with computer problems.

None of the story has been lost. That is not an issue at all.

But I wanted to provide this notice for those wondering where I've been and where the update is.

ee1a2 No.5964

>"Be that as it may, I told you: there is no magic that does that. You and your body were prepared to submit to me, so you listened when I told you not to come until I granted you permission."

Apologies, Infinite Golden Witch, but I'm afraid I have to call bullshit on your statement regarding mind control magic. Why is that? Because of the following words spoken by Erika…

>"A geas compels a person to follow a command… or else. It's dreadful, dreadful magic."


I love you as a character, Beatrice, but I'm afraid you just gave Edward false information.

40580 No.5968

>>5964
I applaud your attention to detail and memory!

Nevertheless there are several possible or even reasonable interpretation beside "bullshit" ;-)
a.) Beatrice could simply not know about this spell and overestimating her knowledge she claims that it therefore doesn't exist.
b.) She could absolutely know it but doesn't want Edward to find anything out about this "It's dreadful, dreadful magic." Whatever Erika meant by that it certainly sounds like something that has "not suitable for mortal brains" written all over it.
If we want to be generous with Beatrice we could say she just wants to protect us by not telling us.

The literal statement is false for another reason: Strictly speaking even a spell like the red truth is a bit of magic that temporarily takes away control over one's body. Only this spell is applied to yourself and your own body instead of other people.


And outside of the story, aristo has not exactly said but hinted very strongly that magic in this world functions mainly follows the "because the plot demands it" principle and not an actual, thought-out set of rules about what is and isn't possible.

ee1a2 No.5969


>not an actual, thought-out set of rules about what is and isn't possible.


The rules and traditions of magical research in this world may be more realistic than you realize :)

a59ed No.5980

Are you okay aristo? How's your computer?

bba77 No.5981

>>5980
Hello everyone.

I decided to take the weekend off because I wasn't feeling well and didn't want to push it. New update is up now. (It's not sexy, but it's a start to the new week.)

Computer issues are resolved, for now. I anticipate updates moving forward at their usual pace.

I hope it's enjoyable.

bba77 No.6005

Hello everyone.

Something came up this weekend so I will likely not be able to write the latest update until Sunday at earliest.

Sorry to make everyone wait.

a59ed No.6010

How has everything been aristo?

bba77 No.6018

Sorry for the unintentional hiatus. This sex scene is written in my head but not typed out yet.

I'm going to aim for the weekend. This delay will not become the norm.

bba77 No.6036

Hello everyone.

I am still working on the latest update. I anticipate it will be ready by tomorrow at latest.

However, there's another issue I wanted to point out and draw attention to.

When pregchan went down early this year, the story migrated to bbw-chan for a duration. Scientist went so far as to personally re-post the entire story there. The link was here: https://bbw-chan.net/elite/res/613.html

But, as you can tell from a quick click, that link doesn't work. bbw-chan's erotic literature page finally pushed it off page 10 and it was deleted.

I checked now, and this thread: https://bbw-chan.net/elite/res/536.html which is where the pregchan story continued, is on page 10 and on the verge of being deleted, it seems.

I of course have my own version saved, but I'm wondering if any reader has archived this? Or possibly if that part of the story could be brought to preg-chan's server? It might be too much to hope for, but ideally I would like the story to be accessible to everyone and keep it so any person with enough time could start reading it from the beginning and catch up to the current update.

If not, I might ask the bbw-chan mods if they will help me preserve it.

bd61c No.6037

I wonder aristo can u archive the whole story?
From beginning till latest to a pdf or Microsoft word with all the choices we made even without the pictures

bba77 No.6041

I could do that, and if the previous thread went down and I have no choice, I would do that.

But, I wonder if perhaps a reader could handle this?

Whenever I look at old parts of the story, I have the urge to correct typoes, anachronisms, etc.

The less time I have to spend archiving the story, the more time I have to spend writing it.

e34e9 No.6071

Hey guys, I noticed something and my mind just ran rampant with it.

Edward's curse was lifted before he actively tried to impregnate The Infinite Golden Witch, but she still experienced her womanly curse despite the virility of his seed. Now, this could just be attributed to a bad timing issue (similar to how Tharja was very near the start of her menstrual when Edward finally arrived in Ruhemania), further affected by the "challenging" game Beatrice made of having Edward earn the key to her womb with her Witches' Party puzzle.

Here's where my mind has run away with this idea: What if Beatrice, The All-Powerful, Precious, Immortal, Infinite Golden Witch is barren? Granted, a Witch of her power would probably be able to rectify such a situation, but evidence shows that she hasn't delved too deeply into fertility magic. Oh, she's mentioned what it would take if Tharja wanted to increase the fertility of her own womb, but from what little Beatrice has revealed about her magical research, she seems to have mainly focused on strengthening forms of magic that solidify her Infinite Beauty, Preciousness, and, most importantly of all, her POWER.

What do you guys think or make of this proposition. I, for one, would find it interesting, if not incredibly tragic, if The Infinite Golden Witch were unable to receive Edward's virile seed and let it take root in her Precious womb.

a5c5d No.6073

>>6071
Nice. If it turns out to be true, this gives Edward and Tharja some leverage over Beatrice. We can do her a favor by using Tarja's fertility magic, that's good if she owes us something.

8addb No.6075

>>6071
I would have to agree that this would make for a rather interesting revelation to come upon, though it is a bit too early to assume she is infertile. We have only been with her for about a month or two, I think. It may take a few times to be able to with certainty whethe it is true or not. But, I think it would be a unexpected twist.
To see the Golden Witch finally wanting a child, but being unable to bear one. This would be rather heartwreking (did I spell that right?) to hear. This information, if she wishes to share it, could lead to Tharja having a set goal in mind with her magic; turning barren Beatrice fertile. Up to this point, she has probably had a general idea of what she wanted from her experiments; stronger legs and back to support many growing children, more eggs to be formed in her ovaries, increase overall fertility, etc. She has simply been doing anything that struck her fancy every day. But now, she would have a focus and endgoal in mind. This would lead to a large growth in her standings as a witch.
Like Wizard said, it also gives us a bit of leverage with Beatrice. Why we would need it, who knows. Tharja is the only one here who has a) a functioning workplace and b) potential materials to work with. Plus, Tharja probably has more experience in this form of magic than Beatrice does, with Beatrice probably has slim to ni experience when it comes to altering a woman's fertility. Doing this kind of thing would no doubt bring us a lot closer to Beatrice as a lover and friend than simply being an accomplice.
All of this is based on circumastance, however. It will probably be a while before we have enough evidence to even suggest Beatrice's infertility, which may not exist. So, let us see in the coming weeks.

bba77 No.6095

Hello everyone.

I am still working on the new scene. Writing new sex scenes is becoming more difficult because I must think of a new way to approach them each time.

However, I noticed the parts of the story that were on bbw-chan have now been removed for being too idle. The mods or whoever runs the site there never responded to my request to archive the page.

Does anyone have it archived? The concern is not for myself but for the readers.

If not, I will have to take care of it myself, eventually, which will remove time I could spend writing.

9c852 No.6130

It's been a week and a half since the last update.

Is everything alright, aristo? Do you need to take a break for a while?

bba77 No.6131

Everything is fine. Part of it are sex scenes are more involved to write, part of it is I keep running out of time. Part of it also was I was trying to figure out how to get the bbw part of the story back.

I'm aiming for a Friday update.

Please follow my DA. I post notices about update statuses there usually instead of here.

8addb No.6172

I hate to say it, but we will have to stop Beatrice's spying and focus on teaching Tharja after the priest is done. She has brought up a lot of points that suggest that Tharja will need to learn how to defend herself eventually. And I would rather that be sooner rather than later. So even though I do not approve of the creation of books, I do want her to be safe. Besides, we do not necessarily have to use said books.

bba77 No.6174

Hello everyone.

The next update will come tomorrow or Monday.

This is less not having time and more I must give careful consideration to the next choice.

I don't mind saying the latest poll result was an unmitigated success.

I hope it's enjoyable.

e34e9 No.6177

>>6172

I think you are misunderstanding the way spellbooks work. Any spellbook that Beatrice creates will not be used as a tool to teach Tharja because Tharja already has a spellbook of her own.

Plus, Beatrice even said herself that she is not allowed to "teach" her anything or even help her with her magical research: Tharja must experiment with magic and learn EVERYTHING on her OWN. Beatrice mentioned that it is taboo for a witch to teach another witch or help her with her magical research.

All Beatrice can do is express her concern to Tharja and encourage her to broaden her focus to other forms of destructive and defensive magic, instead of narrowing her focus on nothing but Fertility magic. If Tharja is to survive, she must have a versatile arsenal of magic that she is equally adept in. She must become a diversified "red mage", so to speak.

8addb No.6178

>>6177
I understand how the spellbooks work. The problem I have with them is that they revolve around family murder to work. If it was not for that reason, I would be all for them.

When the option came up for Beatrice to stop the espionage and begin tutoring Tharja, it also mentioned that she would be creating spellbooks on the side as well. So, if we are to have her teach Tharja, she will be doing her own thing on the side.

And I feel tutoring is far different than teaching. With teaching, you are actively participating in their progression, monitoring and controlling it. With tutoring, you are leaving more of the student to their own devices and pointing them in the right direction.

bba77 No.6186

Hello everyone.

I'm posting to say we might be entering a time where there may be more updates with no choices before an update with a new choice is posted.

In the old days, since there was very little time-skipping, it was easy to make new choices from scene to scene. They all followed each other seamlessly and the audience was also choosing what Edward was doing as the new scene.

However, now that we are in a period in the story where time skips are the norm and the schedule is more pre-determined, I confess the difficult part of writing lately (which I think contributes to update-slipping) is that it's hard to think of new choices for every update.

Many times, new scenes must be entirely established before I can give the audience a proper choice. This means I have to write out the end of one scene, then 'shift gears' to write out a new scene. It is not always easy.

I have disliked posting updates without new choices in the past and always tried to avoid it, but I think I am realizing that with the scenes coming out over a time-skip, it makes more sense to write one, post it, and then start the next one with a fresh mind that is only thinking about that new scene.

This will probably lead to steadier updates.

Of course, if it doesn't work, I will reverse this policy. I will still strive to try to end new updates on a choice.

I hope it's enjoyable.

94b11 No.6191

Tharja wanting Edward to live as long as possible might just the motivator she needs to learn more than just fertility magic. She will need defensive spells and health spells for the occasions when Beatrice isn't available for some reason. AND she should definitively learn shapeshifting in order to fake her death and afterwards become Edward's second (and then third) wife. That's the only way she can stay knocked up for the next fifty, sixty years without giving her abilities away.

bba77 No.6212

Hello everyone.

I saw that this vote was a close one. Thank you everyone for following along with the story and using your one vote.

I want to say to those who voted "no slavery," and that it repulsed them on some level: don't worry. I hear you too. All votes count, even if the choice doesn't win in the end.

I hope the new update scheme is satisfying. It has made things easier for me.

I hope the story is enjoyable.

bba77 No.6227

Hello everyone.

First, my apologies for not having an update yet. This is just a temporary setback because I've been busier than expected. I expect it will clear up by the end of this week.

However, to my surprise, I realized that we've officially passed the one-year mark for when this story first began!

Thank you very sincerely for following along and using your one vote all this time. This story would never have come as far as it has without you. This isn't my achievement, it is everyone's achievement.

Therefore I'd like to ask if anyone has any feedback they'd like to give?

What has been your favorite part of the story so far?

One thing I really like to hear is does anyone have a favorite sex scene, or perhaps at least a favorite girl they like reading a sex scene with? I am always looking for ways to keep them interesting.

Thank you once again. I hope to continue to write this into the next year and more, if I am able.

d6838 No.6230

>>6227
Well Happy Anniversary to us :-)
*champagne poppers pop*


My favorite sex scene was the one with Tharja in which she "promised" Edward that she will bear more children for him then all the other women he knocked up combined.
Close behind are the scenes with Elizabeth where she begs to be bred.

f9cbb No.6232

This story is just so different than it was in the beginning. I think that I started reading around the time that we left for ruhemania, and the world just feels so different now.

My favorite sex scenes are the ones where someone is trying to get pregnant followed by ones with a dominant female (but not feet stuff)

f9cbb No.6233

Congrats on a year of writing this aristo

10bec No.6241

>>6227
I love just about anything with Beatrice. Favorite scene with her is probably her teaser trailer scene or ones where she is dominant. Her character really shines when you want it to and has imo the most interesting backstory/secrets. Favorite sex scene is probably erikas, lots of new things there but still made fun. She was the only girl i felt Edward wasnt either obligated or supposed to take for himself but he conquered her anyway.
Great job so far Aristo lovce where the story has gone! Fair is very hype and I can't wait to delve into some of the more shrouded characters like sully or Margret!

919e9 No.6242

>>6227
Honestly, I liked the dominant scenes with Beatrice the most. Especially the feet scene, even though I know a lot of people hated that scene/thought it was rigged.

0a409 No.6243

>>6227
Apparently I'm somewhat in the minority, but I vastly prefer the Tharja sex scenes. Congratulations on the anniversary, and here's to another year of naughty fun!

bba77 No.6272

Well, here's something I didn't know that could happen.

The current thread of Impregnator Kings is telling me I cannot upload a new reply because it has reached the maximum amount of posts.

I will create a new post.

I hope no one tried to vote and found they couldn't. There is a clear majority, but if anyone did, reply here with your attempted vote.

bba77 No.6273

Vote is closed for that. New post is up. The latest update will soon follow.

Posts are now capped at 500 replies. I was planning to move the current thread because it was getting a little unwieldy, but this solves that problem for me.

If at all possible, please try to have more general reactions/commentary apart from votes in this chat thread than the actual game post so I won't have to make so many different posts as the game continues.

I hope it's enjoyable.

3ec26 No.6280

Wow, that was something! I really enjoyed that sex scene, aristo.

And such interesting details… Beatrice taking the initiative in kissing Edward? "Soft" kisses and gently stroking his cheek? Could it be that Beatrice has developed feelings beyond lust for a mere mortal?
Let's hope for it. That was something we wanted for a long time. And whatever the next big crisis is going to be, having Beatrice a bit more securely on our side will certainly help.

7ae68 No.6281

>>6280
Most certainly sir. I noticed this as well.

I enjoy the sweetness of Tharja's scenes, but Beatrice has a hotness that I very much enjoy. Hopefully we got her pregnant this time.

I wonder if Tharja's fertility magic could give us an early indication…

Anyway, thanks much sir for writing this and working with this bunch of pervs and overthinking nerds. I look forward to more in the new year!

bba77 No.6282

>>6280
>>6281
Thank you both very much. I'm always eager to hear feedback on the quality of the sex scenes and which were hits, so to speak.

Week 6 was a little longer than usual, but I think it is time to move on to week 7. Please feel free to discuss what you want Edward to do in the upcoming week in the main thread.

bba77 No.6285

Happy new year, everyone.

I don't want to push on the story until enough readers have the chance to look over the current setup for the new week, so updates will wait until then. (I imagine it will take that time for people to recover from new year's celebrations anyway.)

Thank you everyone for following along with the story.



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