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e2e89 No.6607[View All]

As promised, I present you what is hopefully going to be a worthy successor to FF.
Before you guys dive in, I do have one thing I'd like to note.
please do note that while I am not a stranger to writing erotic stories, I'm also not a professional writer or a native English speaker.
So don't be surprised if you come across a minor spelling error once in a while, all I can ask is please do be gentle.

Lastly, because I still have no idea if the Twine passages I made work for you guys, I will first present the mechanics to the game and in the second post I will put the actual story.
If Twine does work for you please do tell, otherwise I will have to find another way for you guys to keep track.


Survivability:
As the story progresses Zahlia will have to eat and drink to stay alive and feed the young she's gestating.
Food and drinks can be found all over the world, but be warned, some might have additional effects on Zahlia's body and/or mind.

Health:
Sometimes Zahlia will come across dangerous creatures, if handled poorly these might wound her.
There are 2 forms of wounds: deep wounds and light wounds.

Deep wounds are more serious and can only be healed with the 'Healing hands' ability or the help of certain creatures.
These wounds lower 'Natural Beauty' by 5.

Light wounds are far easier to deal with, they heal over the course of a few days on their own.
However, if 'Healing hands' is used then these will heal together with any deep wounds.
These wounds lower 'Natural Beauty' by 2.

Being wounded impacts the 'Natural Beauty' status for as long as the wound exists, scars aren't a thing in this world so there are no lingering penalties to 'Natural Beauty' after the wound is healed.

Natural Beauty:
Natural Beauty tells you how easily NPC's are swayed by Zahlia.
Many encounters can yield better rewards or outcomes if Zahlia successfully bargains.
Every encounter in which bargaining is possible has a secret set score, if Zahlia has a natural beauty score equal or greater than the set score then it passes.
If Zahlia doesn't then it fails and the outcome will be worse than that if Zahlia hadn't bargained at all.

Sometimes Zahlia will come across hints on how to deal with some creatures, these snippets of knowledge can lower the set score if aquired before bargaining.

Natural beauty can be increased by certain items or encounters in game and is decreased temporarily by wounds.

Preggophillia:
This stat measures Zahlia's interest in pregnancy, it is increased by items or encounters.
Many encounters require a set preggophillia score to initiate.
This score can be lowered by a few points if Zahlia successfully bargains, making the deal more appealing to her.

Lastly, pregnancies with some creatures requires certain perks, these perks can be picked up through edibles or spells.

Most women are looking to have children at some point in time, Zahlia is no exception to this. Therefore, this stat starts at 3.
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f4d36 No.6764

>>6763
>>6757
i third this

e2e89 No.6770

I'm closing the vote option 1 has won.

>>6760
Your wish might be granted… Sometime. :P

e2e89 No.6774

>>6770
Once again I'm going to have to delay sadly.
The next part is well underway, but still needs some more work which I won't be able to do today.
I expect finishing it off tomorrow is most likely, but who knows; Maybe I'll find some extra time later tonight ;P

e2e89 No.6779

A cold chill ran down Zahlia’s spine while she looked around the courtyard.
It was barely illuminated by the bleak light the moon had to offer, giving it an eerie feeling in combination with the cold touch of the nighttime desert.
Already being creeped out by the courtyard Zahlia didn’t even want to think about what might stalk the city streets at night, this left her with 2 options; Either the temple or the stables.
Initially drawn to the stables in the hope she’d find some hay to sleep on; That was until she saw a dim orange glow escaping the stables around the edges of the door.
Not interested in meeting more of the somewhat ‘whacky’ inhabitants of Nymar for now, Zahlia quickly turned around and decided to go the temple.
The only place that seemed not entirely creepy and was shrouded in the darkness of the night, promising sweet solitude for at least a while.

The large golden gilded doors slowly opened with a slight squeak, revealing a temple quite similar to those she’d seen while visiting the Egyptian city of Luxor.
Large pillars at least 12 meters high held the roof around the inner courtyard in place and beautiful drawings telling stories of old covered every single wall she could find.
The moonlight lit up a pond in the middle of the courtyard which was overgrown with large exotic flowers unknown to Zahlia.

With the cold now really starting to cool her down Zahlia quickly moved on deeper into the temple.
After the next set of large golden doors Zahlia found solitude at last, the room was completely closed off from the outside except for some small windows high up on the walls.
Tired and hungry Zahlia decided to just take it, the place was a bit warmer than outside and didn’t seem to harbour anyone else.
She grabbed a piece of thin silk from one of the smaller altars and settled in a corner trying to get some rest.
The attempt was rather unsuccessful however, as she was constantly reminded by her stomach of her hunger.
She grabbed the strange fruit and looked at it with distrust, if her last experience hadn’t been so strange she probably would have eaten it right when she got it.
Yet it seems there’s no more ways to delay, her stomach growled violently as the sweet smell of the fruit intensified the feeling of hunger.
Dreading her situation she finally took a bite of the fruit which was unsurprisingly just as sweet as the smell it had.
Zahlia managed to devour the entire thing within a minute or 2, strangely satisfied she leaned back as she felt the bits of fruit settle in her stomach.
Not much later the same strange warmth she had felt from the drink earlier that day also started to spread from her stomach.
This time however, the warmth went towards her hips and backside instead.
Unlike last time however, she wasn’t dragged violently into another vision.
Instead with the comfort of a full stomach and the effect it provided she settled in her corner only to fall into a deep sleep.

While the fruit did not give her another vision, it certainly did taint her dreams.
In her dream she found herself back in the temple’s courtyard.
Unlike what she had seen before, the courtyard had come to life.
The plants which were all cropped up around the pond when she passed through there had now spread it’s tendrils throughout the courtyard and even more of these exotic plants had popped up further away from the center. Entranced by the beautiful colours of the flowers Zahlia at first did not notice the moaning coming from near the pond.
It took her a while to locate the person amongst the jungle of tendrils, leaves, and flowers, but eventually she found the source of the moaning.
A young woman leaning on all fours enjoying one of the thicker tendrils penetrating her womanhood.
Strangely enticed by the sight Zahlia watches from distance, feeling her nipples harden and her slit moistening at the sight of this thick firm tendril sliding in and out of her love tunnel.
For a few minutes Zahlia was able to enjoy the strange unlikely mates breeding.
The air was filed with the constant moaning of the woman whenever the tendril slid deeper inside of her while her breasts jiggled back and forth in unity with the rest of her body.
Suddenly the woman releases the loudest moan so far and pushes her upper body down while pushing her ass up, the tendril’s movement slows down until it came to a complete halt.
For a few moments Zahlia was confused at the current events, until she noticed how the tendril has small bulges traveling towards the woman’s stretched womanhood.
Whether it was actual seeds or just globs of semen Zahlia did not know, regardless of that fact she found it strangely appealing.
Not much later the tendril retreated back to the plant it was a part of leaving the recently inseminated woman exhausted on the ground.
Being the good natured girl Zahlia is she immediately approached the woman to help her up.
A good gesture, yet it turned out an unnecessary one as well.
Right before Zahlia reached the woman she came back to life and got up on her own.
At this point Zahlia had gotten so close she was pretty much face to face with the woman.
Unsurprisingly, the woman seemed quite surprised by Zahlia’s sudden appearance, however not for the reasons one would think.
“My lord, has your mother never thought you a woman’s womb should never be empty? Or don’t you agree bulging with someone’s spawn like this, is the best thing in life?” the woman said while she grabbed Zahlia’s hands and put them on her own maternal belly for Zahlia to explore.
Where the huge belly had suddenly come from puzzeled Zahlia for a minute, she could have sworn the woman had a completely flat belly less than a minute ago.
Normally Zahlia would just retract her hands and kindly reject the offer, however this time she couldn’t put herself to it.
She found the touch of the stretched tanned skin, combined with the firmness of her belly surprisingly alluring.
With joy Zahlia ran her hands along the rounding of this woman’s bulging belly until she suddenly whispered something in Zahlia’s ear.
“Go fulfill your duty Zahlia, it’s your destiny.” She said right as Zahlia started to wake up again.

Once again the sun had risen, promising another day full of maternal adventure.
Yet that adventure was going to start sooner than Zahlia had expected.
“Well hi there! About time you woke up darling.” A feminine voice right in front of her said.
Shocked by the unexpected company Zahlia looked up only to find yet another surprise.
A woman stood right in front of Zahlia.
She was relatively long with a tanned skin found on most Arab people, her hair was pitch black and her eyes deep brown.
Furthermore, she had a fairly sizable pair of mammaries and a swollen pregnant belly which looked like she was about to give birth.
That however, was not the most surprising part.
This woman was the woman she saw in her dream.
“Come on darling, are you just going to sit and stare all day? Breakfast isn’t going to serve itself and by the looks of you I’d say you could definitely use some.” The woman said after Zahlia had been staring at her for a while.
With a lot of effort the woman managed to herd Zahlia back to the court yard while introducing herself and inquiring about Zahlia.
Her name was Maela and she too just woke up at the palace one day with no clue what had happened.
After wandering the streets of the city for a while she eventually just settled in the temple with her ‘friends’ where she’s been living ever since.



Time to let your own creativity flow, I'm not giving any options this time.
This part can be used to collect some information on Zahlia's surroundings and what might be encountered in the future.
The three most popular questions will be answered if it is possible for Maela to know the answer.
You may both submit a question and vote for another. If you aren't submitting a question then I'll give you 2 votes.

Survivability: +10%
''Preggophillia: +7 (Is now 15)
''Beauty: +5 (Zahlia will discover the change in the next part.)

Character sheet:https://www.dropbox.com/s/2il2wamacxmeq1i/Character%20sheet%201.003.html?dl=0

A few things to note.
I have changed the writings style a bit, the switch from present to past tense is probably the most notable.
I prefer to write in the past tense, so it should create a better experience for you all.
Also, before people point it out. I am well aware I did not describe what the fruit exactly did to Zahlia, no worries I'll cover that next time.

e2e89 No.6780

>>6779
Oh and I'm also experimenting with the italics and the quotation marks.
I'm not really fond of doing it like in this part, so I expect to change that next time.

fc74c No.6786

>>6779
Considering that she is still completely new, I want Zahlia to ask:
"Do you know a way back home?" (meaning earth if Maela answers that she considers Nymeria her home)
"Is the temple a safe place?" (i.e. will Zahlia be in danger of being raped here)
"How did this world came to be the way it is?" (i.e. was it always the case that they had to rely on human females for reproduction? If not, what changed?)
as well as
"Where can I buy a flying carpet?" ;-)

37397 No.6795

Ask "How long have you been pregnant?"

21f65 No.6797

Ask about the city and town.

21f65 No.6798

Sorry. Meant temple

0cb1f No.6801

Lets, for a little bit of a conversation starter, begin to flirt with the woman, and ask about her general life. Afterall, we do want to become pregnant ourselves, so lets show a pregnant woman some love.

Next question, after buttering her up a bit, "Is this temple a safe place, and what is its purpose?"

Last question, ask for some general information about the surronding area, and the temple. Whats in the stables?

Good CYOA btw, really liking the pacing so far

7ede6 No.6802

>>6801
Vote for this

68a11 No.6805

1. Who are you?

2. What are the areas surrounding here?

3. Any people/places to look/watch out for?

d99d4 No.6806

>>6801
I second this

e2e89 No.6811

I'm closing the vote >>6801 has won.
By the slow and few reactions I'd call a write in like this not really a success. In the future I'll see if I can refine it to make it more engaging and encourage more people to put their ideas in.

>>6801 Also, thank you kindly sir. I do my best to make it as enjoyable as possible, it's nice to recieve confirmation I'm doing good.

The next part should be out tomorrow, but by now it should be pretty obvious that I'm not always able to deliver on that promise.

c0b10 No.6812

>>6811
I think the problem, if I could say so myself, was the pure broadness of it. I think if you had led us along, with the woman giving us a topic, to which we could respond, would have been better. Just my thoughts, personally

f12b2 No.6814

>>6811

I agree with the anon in 6812. It's a problem that I've run into while DMing before, giving the players to much leeway that they become paralyzed by indecision (not that i'm advocating for heavy railroading, but we need options to guide us).

I think for this update, giving us options like :
1.) ask about Maela's history
2.) ask about city
3.) ask about the other residents
4.) ask about the items that have been given to us/foisted on us
5.) ask a different question
would have kept a lot of the freeform that you were looking for (especially if you tell us to be as specific as we want) while shaping our ideas in a way that could have been more useful to you as the CYOAmaster.

e6f71 No.6819

>>6814
This is a good strategy. Giving us vague choices on which we can base our own votes always helps, since it gives people a general idea of how to respond.

e2e89 No.6820

>>6814
Thank you for the advice, I'll keep it in mind whenever I'll throw in another write in.

I'm working on the story right now, unless something enexpected comes my way it should be released today.
>>6814

e2e89 No.6825

“So eh… Maela… How did you manage to end up here at this place?’’
“I know you woke up here one day just like me, but why settle at this temple?” Zahlia asked, being plagued by her overzealous sense of curiosity.
Maela stayed silent for a while, trying to formulate an answer.
“Bare necessity I suppose. For a while I was just exploring the city, looking for a way out.”
“One day those blasted jackal… things… caught my scent again and chased me through the entire city.’’
Eventually I managed to flee here in the hopes they’d leave me alone.’’
“I was a fool to believe they would, but luckily one of the locals, who is now my mate, stepped in and cracked some skulls.’’
“Ever since, those jackals haven’t dared show their faces around the palace.’’
“Plus my mate fulfills my every need, unlike most of the locals around here.“

“Yeah I can see you’re well taken care of” Zahlia replied nodding towards the massive round shape that was Maela’s belly.
In return Malea cracked a smile and teased Zahlia, causing her to blush. “Oh no worries girl, we can get you all set up with a bun of your own in no time!”
“Maybe, we’ll see about that later.” Zahlia retaliated with a lewd expression on her face, causing both to laugh.

“Anyhow, what is this place anyways? I mean, I know it’s a temple, but a temple to worship what exactly?” Zahlia asked, still not having satisfied her curiousity.
“I don’t really know to be honest.”
“My guess at what those stories you find all over the temple exactly tell is just as good as yours really.”
“From the few depictions I’ve found, mixed with some common sense, I’d say these people worshipped the river flowing through these lands.”
“After all, it is one of the few, if not the only, thing allowing life to exist around here.”
“I’ve also found some carvings and statues of some really hung creatures and very gravid women.”
“So I’d say they found fertility really important, but unless I find a Rosetta’s stone around here somewhere there’s no way to know for sure.”
“Either way, I seem to be doing a good job at keeping the local religion alive.” Maela answered while patting her swollen midriff.
“I see, and what about the stables on the other side of the courtyard then?’’
“ I saw there was some light coming from the place last night, anything interesting there?’’ Zahlia asked as she was continuing her investigation.
“Oh that’s just Markus.’’
“The poor bastard had his junk cut off at some point, without the tools to fulfill the goal every damn male around here seems to have he’s settled down there and has taken it upon himself to take care of his ‘friends’ instead.’’
“He’s helped me out restoring the place a little, sadly my mate isn’t too mobile outside of the courtyard. So I had to ask Markus instead, but I can’t say I know him that well.’’
“He’s harmless though.”
`
Still not satisfied with the amount of information she got Zahlia kept the barrage of questions going, at this point however they had reached the courtyard so Maela cut it off.
“Relax girl, you’ll have plenty of time to ask more questions.’’
“For now though, I’d like you to meet my mate and my children.” At first Zahlia was quite confused as Maela pointed at the overgrown garden.
For a few moments she scanned the garden, concentrating on finding a person or a creature.
Then she remembered what she saw in a dream, cursing her own stupidity she only answered with an “Oooooohh….”.
Maela took it surprisingly lightly, being the second person in Nymeria now to laugh at Zahlia’s derpiness.

Maela led her to a patio somewhere at the right side of the garden, the place was quite comfortable.
There were plenty soft pillows to sit on and the shade made the scorching desert heat bearable.
Maela served several types of fruit, all of them unknown to Zahlia yet strangely similar to some she did know.
After her previous experiences Zahlia was rather distrustful towards the strange fruits, and only after Maela had promised her nothing would happen she dared to take a bite.
They were all very juicy, sweet and completely seedless, the latter allowed the entire fruit to be eaten in a few large bites.
Yet it did make Zahlia wonder why none of them had any seeds in them, being the derp she is Zahlia asked Maela straight away.
She had barely asked the question before Zahlia blushed and once again cursed her stupidity.
Maela had noticed and was quite amused with it, laughing she patted her round belly again and told her that their seeds do not grow in dirt.
“You know, I’m actually kind of sad to see you still have such a flat belly.”
“Why is it you still don’t have a bun in the oven darling?’’
“I mean, you do have the hips to support a pregnancy or two.”
“I tell you what, why don’t you give my mate something back.”
“I’m sure that he’ll welcome you back anytime you need food and rest if you pop a podling for him.”
Maela’s sudden suggestion startled Zahlia for sure, yet it did seem to make more and more sense the longer she thought about it.
Furthermore, Maela’s slight obsession for Zahlia’s hips made her aware that her skirt had gotten a bit tighter than she remembered it was.
To her surprise her hips seem to have grown overnight, a side effect of yesterday’s dinner she imagined.
What were once hips who could usually be found on a guy, had been transformed to be wider and curvier like that on a girl far in her puberty.
“Why do you care so much about me being pregnant or not?” Zahlia asked in return.
In response Maela cracked a smile and said “Well, let’s just say that ILikePregnancy.”
“But what do you say? I promise it will feel good from conception to birth.”

Survivability: +20% (100%) Zahlia has been able to eat up completely.

What is our not so maternal Zahlia going to do?:
Option 1: Go for a roll in the hay with Maela’s mate
Option 2: Go to the stables
Option 3: Explore the city

AUTHOR'S NOTE:
In order to try and get the community to be more involved in this CYOA I'm going to throw in easter eggs honoring those people.
Some of those easter eggs will be quite obvious (like in this part) and some of them will be a bit harder to find (like the one for The Wizard Of Oz).
If you contribute enough I will put you in for sure, so if you want to be referenced in this CYOA then get yourself an username and start contributing.
To make things clear, by contributing I generally mean leaving more than just your vote in the comment section.
Great examples of this are The Wizard of Oz, ILikePregnancy, and Call Me Lucifer (You're up next buddy).

e2e89 No.6826

“So eh… Maela… How did you manage to end up here at this place?’’
“I know you woke up here one day just like me, but why settle at this temple?” Zahlia asked, being plagued by her overzealous sense of curiosity.
Maela stayed silent for a while, trying to formulate an answer.
“Bare necessity I suppose. For a while I was just exploring the city, looking for a way out.”
“One day those blasted jackal… things… caught my scent again and chased me through the entire city.’’
Eventually I managed to flee here in the hopes they’d leave me alone.’’
“I was a fool to believe they would, but luckily one of the locals, who is now my mate, stepped in and cracked some skulls.’’
“Ever since, those jackals haven’t dared show their faces around the palace.’’
“Plus my mate fulfills my every need, unlike most of the locals around here.“

“Yeah I can see you’re well taken care of” Zahlia replied nodding towards the massive round shape that was Maela’s belly.
In return Malea cracked a smile and teased Zahlia, causing her to blush. “Oh no worries girl, we can get you all set up with a bun of your own in no time!”
“Maybe, we’ll see about that later.” Zahlia retaliated with a lewd expression on her face, causing both to laugh.

“Anyhow, what is this place anyways? I mean, I know it’s a temple, but a temple to worship what exactly?” Zahlia asked, still not having satisfied her curiousity.
“I don’t really know to be honest.”
“My guess at what those stories you find all over the temple exactly tell is just as good as yours really.”
“From the few depictions I’ve found, mixed with some common sense, I’d say these people worshipped the river flowing through these lands.”
“After all, it is one of the few, if not the only, thing allowing life to exist around here.”
“I’ve also found some carvings and statues of some really hung creatures and very gravid women.”
“So I’d say they found fertility really important, but unless I find a Rosetta’s stone around here somewhere there’s no way to know for sure.”
“Either way, I seem to be doing a good job at keeping the local religion alive.” Maela answered while patting her swollen midriff.
“I see, and what about the stables on the other side of the courtyard then?’’
“ I saw there was some light coming from the place last night, anything interesting there?’’ Zahlia asked as she was continuing her investigation.
“Oh that’s just Markus.’’
“The poor bastard had his junk cut off at some point, without the tools to fulfill the goal every damn male around here seems to have he’s settled down there and has taken it upon himself to take care of his ‘friends’ instead.’’
“He’s helped me out restoring the place a little, sadly my mate isn’t too mobile outside of the courtyard. So I had to ask Markus instead, but I can’t say I know him that well.’’
“He’s harmless though.”
`
Still not satisfied with the amount of information she got Zahlia kept the barrage of questions going, at this point however they had reached the courtyard so Maela cut it off.
“Relax girl, you’ll have plenty of time to ask more questions.’’
“For now though, I’d like you to meet my mate and my children.” At first Zahlia was quite confused as Maela pointed at the overgrown garden.
For a few moments she scanned the garden, concentrating on finding a person or a creature.
Then she remembered what she saw in a dream, cursing her own stupidity she only answered with an “Oooooohh….”.
Maela took it surprisingly lightly, being the second person in Nymeria now to laugh at Zahlia’s derpiness.

Maela led her to a patio somewhere at the right side of the garden, the place was quite comfortable.
There were plenty soft pillows to sit on and the shade made the scorching desert heat bearable.
Maela served several types of fruit, all of them unknown to Zahlia yet strangely similar to some she did know.
After her previous experiences Zahlia was rather distrustful towards the strange fruits, and only after Maela had promised her nothing would happen she dared to take a bite.
They were all very juicy, sweet and completely seedless, the latter allowed the entire fruit to be eaten in a few large bites.
Yet it did make Zahlia wonder why none of them had any seeds in them, being the derp she is Zahlia asked Maela straight away.
She had barely asked the question before Zahlia blushed and once again cursed her stupidity.
Maela had noticed and was quite amused with it, laughing she patted her round belly again and told her that their seeds do not grow in dirt.
“You know, I’m actually kind of sad to see you still have such a flat belly.”
“Why is it you still don’t have a bun in the oven darling?’’
“I mean, you do have the hips to support a pregnancy or two.”
“I tell you what, why don’t you give my mate something back.”
“I’m sure that he’ll welcome you back anytime you need food and rest if you pop a podling for him.”
Maela’s sudden suggestion startled Zahlia for sure, yet it did seem to make more and more sense the longer she thought about it.
Furthermore, Maela’s slight obsession for Zahlia’s hips made her aware that her skirt had gotten a bit tighter than she remembered it was.
To her surprise her hips seem to have grown overnight, a side effect of yesterday’s dinner she imagined.
What were once hips who could usually be found on a guy, had been transformed to be wider and curvier like that on a girl far in her puberty.
“Why do you care so much about me being pregnant or not?” Zahlia asked in return.
In response Maela cracked a smile and said “Well, let’s just say that ILikePregnancy.”
“But what do you say? I promise it will feel good from conception to birth.”

Survivability: +20% (100%) Zahlia has been able to eat up completely.

What is our not so maternal Zahlia going to do?:
Option 1: Go for a roll in the hay with Maela’s mate
Option 2: Go to the stables
Option 3: Explore the city

Character sheet: https://www.dropbox.com/s/iafvuj2gca8ldow/Character%20sheet%201.004.html?dl=0

AUTHOR'S NOTE:
In order to try and get the community to be more involved in this CYOA I'm going to throw in easter eggs honoring those people.
Some of those easter eggs will be quite obvious (like in this part) and some of them will be a bit harder to find (like the one for The Wizard Of Oz).
If you contribute enough I will put you in for sure, so if you want to be referenced in this CYOA then get yourself an username and start contributing.
To make things clear, by contributing I generally mean leaving more than just your vote in the comment section.
Great examples of this are The Wizard of Oz, ILikePregnancy, and Call Me Lucifer (You're up next buddy).

8f6ec No.6828

Option 1, and let's do a bit of a suggestive move by saying that we want her to join us.

cb55f No.6829

>>6826
Write-in with a twist on option one: Zahlia should ask whether or not the protection Maela enjoys from her bud-dy (yeah, I'm a sucker for bad puns, sue me!) would extend to her too if she agrees to do it. At least while she's in the temple.

In story I think this is reasonable to ask because Zahlia has heard a lot of strange people and "people" telling her how dangerous Nymeria is. The very first person she met wants to fuck her right away and right there. The next one is a mysterious, stalker-y figure whose only quality is that he doesn't want to rape her. And now a story about jackals!? She must be freaked! No matter how much she is enjoying the general attention or the thought of being pregnant herself, in my mind she still has safety on the very top of her priority list.

Outside of story, I think it's nice to have a place to retreat should things get ugly further down the line. A base of operations so to speak.

45757 No.6831

>>6829
Agreed. Also, that pun was bad and you should feel bad. :P

21f65 No.6832

Option 1 and get a supply of food on your way

54b7d No.6837

Option 1

2b018 No.6839

Option 2.
While Zhalia is warming up to the idea of being pregnant, I don't think she's really ready to want to be pregnant. As a reader, I'd love to see option 1; however, I think that option 2 is more appropriate.
Option 3 I think would happen if she had someone with her.

d99d4 No.6841

option 1

bd506 No.6843

Option 1 for sure

60c81 No.6845

I already voted, so this is more of a chat thing.

Might be a bit early, but I think we should plot out our next moves in regards to Elos. We now are at the required preggophilia to have a roll in the hay with Elos. Holly was screwed by Sole, and I imagine Elos will be little different.

With that in mind, I think our next move after this choice should be to go back to Elos, and bargain to get more questions from him. The wording of our deal should be very tight.

Something similar to "You will assist me on my journey around this strange land, the minute we have sex." Just a shot in the dark, some others probably have better ideas.

31dee No.6846

>>6839
I vote the same as this person.

46579 No.6848

>>6828
I vote for this

f12b2 No.6849

While I want to vote option 3, facing down packs of jackals by herself is way too much to expect of Zahlia. I would rather not get pregnant until we figure out more that's going on around here.

With that in mind, I vote for option 2. I'm pretty curious to see who Markus's friends are and learn about whoever cut off his junk.

Thanks for the shout out Taco.

0ef43 No.6857

Option two. It's too early to start filling up like this, we barely know who they are.

5fde1 No.6861

Option 1

ce496 No.6874

From the sound of it, the jackals need a sent to track her. So I'm really down for her to search the city. Plus I want her to find more items. But the next reasonable step is to check the stables.

So Option 2 and then try to explore the city

8b4ac No.6877

option 1

d7667 No.6893

Option 1

ee546 No.6898

Option 1

f4d36 No.6904

option 1

cb3ff No.6905

Option 1

dd004 No.6915

Option 1

e2e89 No.6916

I'm closing the vote, needless to say that option 1 got the most votes.

I will probably make it a bit harder in the future to get knocked up, the people who voted against it actually had some really good points RP wise.
However, this is being done democratically so option 1 it is.
(No worries for the people who voted for option 1, I won't make it nigh impossible either. This is a fetish forum after all.)

e2e89 No.6936

Just a bit of a headsup.
I obviously wasn't able to make the next part yesterday, today might be the same case.
I will try to complete it in the evening, but since this weekend is very busy for me there is a chance you'll only get to see it next Monday.
My apologies for the delay.

e2e89 No.6942

I got some rather unpleasant news to share I'm afraid.
This week is going to be just as busy as the weekend was for me, so I'm going to have to put the next deadline for myself on coming Monday.
Currently I simply have too many obligations to take care of which take up all my time and are keeping me from writing the next part.
Normally I would just spread the story out over a few days and slowly chip away at it, but this one will probably be for many, if not for everyone, the most interesting one so far.
Therefore, I want to put in a good chunk of time and write it in one go to make sure it's of good quality, instead of doing small pieces at a time and possibly make mistakes or break cohesion of the story.
Next week most of my obligations will have been taken care of and it should be business as usual again.
My opologies in advance, but on the bright side that does mean you will have 2 stories in one week next time.
Of course, it is always possible that I do manage to find a few hours I have nothing to do and will write it then, so do keep an eye on the topic.

984a2 No.6992

This dead?

e3c4d No.6993

I'm under the impression that Golden Taco is to be assumed busy until further notice. So I'd give him another week or so

e3c4d No.6994

I also missed that he said by Monday, so Probably check back tomorrow

984a2 No.6995

He said Monday almost two weeks ago

e2e89 No.7003

Hello guys,
It has been a while hasn't it?
As a short answer to if this story is dead I can say: No!
I fully intend to continue the story, however there is currently one problem.
In short, I'm just extremely busy.
The longer version is that there are 2 reasons I'm extremely busy.
Those reasons I prefer not to share with the internet as they are rather personal, but one takes up a massive amount of my time and the other causes a lot of inconvenience which in turn becomes rather time consuming as well.

I really hate to say it which is also why I've been rather silent, but chances are I'll have to shelve this CYOA until halfway next month.
On the bright side in one and a half month I'll be sitting next to a pool somewhere in the caribbean, during which I'd say there is plenty of time to crank out these parts.
Quite a few times I've tried to sit down and work on the next part for a few hours, but either something else comes up or I'm too fed up with my obligations (which are quite similar) to work on this.
I sincerely apologize for this, I wish I could have made my previous deadlines, but sometimes life likes to get in the way.

Lastly, if you guys want to continue this CYOA earlier (which I fully understand), there is another way.
I am willing to hand over the story to someone else on a few conditions.
Firstly, Someone will have to volunteer, preferably someone with some experience with CYOA's or writing.
Secondly, that someone will need the support from a large group of the others involved.
Now, if no one steps up or if you guys prefer to keep me as the writer then I promise that I will try to find a some time to write, the uploads however will be on a irregular basis with sometimes a lot of time inbetween if I can find time at all.
The reason I started this CYOA was to give back to a community I've been part of for a while now, however if stepping back and letting someone take over will contribute more then I fully support that.

Let me know what you guys think.

45757 No.7004

>>7003
I'd honestly rather you stay in charge, but you COULD delegate the writing to someone else for a while. Give them a quick outline, let them write and send to you for proofing, and you post with credit.
If you'd rather not/can't, then I'd be happy to wait until you can get back in the saddle.



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