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e2e89 No.6607[Last 50 Posts]

As promised, I present you what is hopefully going to be a worthy successor to FF.
Before you guys dive in, I do have one thing I'd like to note.
please do note that while I am not a stranger to writing erotic stories, I'm also not a professional writer or a native English speaker.
So don't be surprised if you come across a minor spelling error once in a while, all I can ask is please do be gentle.

Lastly, because I still have no idea if the Twine passages I made work for you guys, I will first present the mechanics to the game and in the second post I will put the actual story.
If Twine does work for you please do tell, otherwise I will have to find another way for you guys to keep track.


Survivability:
As the story progresses Zahlia will have to eat and drink to stay alive and feed the young she's gestating.
Food and drinks can be found all over the world, but be warned, some might have additional effects on Zahlia's body and/or mind.

Health:
Sometimes Zahlia will come across dangerous creatures, if handled poorly these might wound her.
There are 2 forms of wounds: deep wounds and light wounds.

Deep wounds are more serious and can only be healed with the 'Healing hands' ability or the help of certain creatures.
These wounds lower 'Natural Beauty' by 5.

Light wounds are far easier to deal with, they heal over the course of a few days on their own.
However, if 'Healing hands' is used then these will heal together with any deep wounds.
These wounds lower 'Natural Beauty' by 2.

Being wounded impacts the 'Natural Beauty' status for as long as the wound exists, scars aren't a thing in this world so there are no lingering penalties to 'Natural Beauty' after the wound is healed.

Natural Beauty:
Natural Beauty tells you how easily NPC's are swayed by Zahlia.
Many encounters can yield better rewards or outcomes if Zahlia successfully bargains.
Every encounter in which bargaining is possible has a secret set score, if Zahlia has a natural beauty score equal or greater than the set score then it passes.
If Zahlia doesn't then it fails and the outcome will be worse than that if Zahlia hadn't bargained at all.

Sometimes Zahlia will come across hints on how to deal with some creatures, these snippets of knowledge can lower the set score if aquired before bargaining.

Natural beauty can be increased by certain items or encounters in game and is decreased temporarily by wounds.

Preggophillia:
This stat measures Zahlia's interest in pregnancy, it is increased by items or encounters.
Many encounters require a set preggophillia score to initiate.
This score can be lowered by a few points if Zahlia successfully bargains, making the deal more appealing to her.

Lastly, pregnancies with some creatures requires certain perks, these perks can be picked up through edibles or spells.

Most women are looking to have children at some point in time, Zahlia is no exception to this. Therefore, this stat starts at 3.

e2e89 No.6608

Woken by the warm touch of the sun and the soft caressing of a warm breeze on her skin, Zahlia wakes up in complete comfort.
Not interested in getting up the sleepy woman turns around with her eyes still closed, now enjoying the warm touch of the sun on her back.
For a few minutes she stays in this position hoping it would last forever.
That is, until she remembers her home town is suppossed to be nearly burried in snow.
Alarmed by the strange tropical warmth she shoots up with her eyes wide open.

Zahlia finds herself sitting on a king-sized bed covered in soft silken cloth and cushions.
The room is made entirely out of white marble and is furnished with wooden furnishings covered in intricate yet beautiful carvings.
The room is fit for royalty except for one major detail, all over the room small piles of sand cover part of the ground.

'Where am I?' Zahlia asks herself while she cautiously walks towards the large open balcony bordering the room.
As she steps onto the balcony Zahlia is blinded by the brightness of the sun, slowly but surely more of the view the balcony offers becomes visible to her.
A city, made mostly out of a white stone not too different from limestone.
Yet it is not like any city she's ever seen, there are no skyscrapers or highways to be found.
Only small paved streets, the occasional square and at the edge of the city a big wall.
This however, is not the strangest thing about the city.
The many streets and squares Zahlia sees all have one thing in common, they're completely deserted.
Beyond the wall Zahlia sees only two things.
A rocky desert and a large river, split in two by the city. Beyond that the desert sands are swept up by the wind blocking sight of what might lie beyond.

The view is breathtaking.
In fact, so breathtaking that Zahlia only now notices that she's completely naked.
Embarrassed, she quickly retreats back into the room hoping to find something to cover herself up with.
Within moments she finds what she's looking for.
On a table she finds a deep red thong, a skirt in the same colour covering her up to right above her knees, and a dark orange top only covering up her upper chest with potential for showing cleavage.
Reminded, by this Zahlia sighs of dissapointment. 'Curse you puberty!'

On the same table Zahlia also finds a clay bottle with a small piece of paper containing some text.

Drink my dear. Drink and doors will open.
- GT

Slightly freaked out by this weird message she pops the cork and smells the liquid inside.
It was a strange sweet smell, not like anything she's ever come across.
'Whoever left that really needs to work on not being creepy.' she mumbles.
Not trusting the stuff she puts the cork back on and leaves it where she found it for now.

As far as Zahlia can see there is only one way out, which is through a large double door on the far side of the room.
What will Zahlia do?

Option 1: Leave the bottle for now and go through the door looking for answers.

Option 2: Drink the stuff anyways and then move on.

Option 3: Search the room for usefull stuff or another way out.

Ps. You are always able to make suggestions yourself, if it gets enough votes I will incorporate it.

ba226 No.6609

Ill vote for a merger of 2 & 3. Let's drink, then search the room

e2e89 No.6610

Looks like I'm a bit airheaded today.
Here is the link to the character sheet.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/a1mvebzvhfz6ifd/Character%20sheet.html?dl=0

Again, any kind of feedback is greatly appreciated.
If implemented properly it wil make things much more easy to track as the story progresses.

Hopefully I won't forget it for next time, so coming Monday you should be able to find it after the options are given.

ba226 No.6612

I really like your use of twine for the Character Sheet. Slogging through a google doc really makes it less appealing, so having twine is a great alternative

d99d4 No.6613

option 3 then option 2

c9e21 No.6614

>>6609
This

93bb2 No.6615

I vote for >>6609 our situation could use all the help it can get

79519 No.6617

Drink, then search. Whilst drinking unknown liquids can be dangerous, given the nature of the quest and the fact that the river may be a fair distance away, this seems like a good idea.

45757 No.6618

>>6609
Fourthed.

dd0cf No.6619

2 then 3

f12b2 No.6620

Option 3 them option 2

f4d36 No.6621

3 then 2

cdf92 No.6622

>>6608
Option 3.

58158 No.6623

2 then 3

48978 No.6624

option 2.

ef26e No.6625

Normally you just don't drink random liquids, but Ill roll with the majority. 2 then 3

fbf43 No.6626

>>6610
FYI: I cannot read the character sheet, neither with Edge nor with Vivaldi browser (=Chromium under the hood). After inspecting the source code, I suspect that the abundance of javascript code might too suspicious to my adblocker.
Is it really necessary to have your own rendering engine for a proprietary XML-format in that file? What's wrong with everyday HTML+CSS?

e2e89 No.6627

>>6626
I am using it on Chrome and I have tested it on Edge too. Both work fine for me, but that is not a surprise really since its my own work.
That's why I asked you guys for feedback on it.

I created the character sheet in Twine, so it should be a standard HTML link.
As you might know Twine is not exactly a ridiculously advanced tool and only really used for creating simple games or interactive stories.
Now, I must admit I am far from an expert when it comes to scripting, programming and coding.
In fact, I've got no clue what you mean with about half of the terms you're throwing around.
But I'm using the standard settings in Twine, so it really suprises me that a browser refuses to open something made with a tool designed for easy use and accessablity.

I suggest you try opening some other HTML stories/games made in Twine to see if you run into the same issue. If so that would be a good pointer that either the browser itself or an extension is messing with it indeed.

For now I'll keep it like this, but I will start looking into more user friendly options.
If need be I will throw it into Google Docs.
With presenting the character sheet like this I had hoped to make it a bit more clear and less boring to read through, but availablity comes first.

fbf43 No.6628

>>6627
I had never heard of twine before today, but at least the file in the dropbox isn't just standard HTML (don't let the *.html filename fool you; if you look inside you'll see it).
Have you tested the file offline or online? I haven't analysed it in depth, but a lot of JavaScript-Frameworks load external scripts which might be blocked by browsers, firewalls, ad- & script-blockers, … if a local file tries that. (Which is also why it's difficult to say why it works for you and not for me, there are too many programs that could interfere here)

291f5 No.6629

Another vote for 2 then 3

97725 No.6630

Worked for Alice! Gonna vote for 2 then 3.

e2e89 No.6631

I'm closing the vote and will get to writing soon.
Before I do however, I will finish the storyboard first to make absolutely sure I'm not writing myself into a corner.
It will be a little while before the story is getting posted, but expect the next part today.

>>6617
At least you tried your best making it sound like a good decision, props for trying ;P
I had a failsave ready anyways since this perk is going to be extremely important for the story, but its good to see you guys are so enthausiastic about drinking unknown liquids.

e2e89 No.6632

>>6628
You need to be online for it to work just like accessing anything else in a browser. If you don't you'll get Error_file_Not_Found.

Also, I'd like to know from other people if they can access it. At the moment, I have a yes and a no, so more feedback would be appreciated.

544fb No.6633

>>6632
I can access it, and I'm eager to see what it becomes later~

21f65 No.6634

>>6633

I second this

e2e89 No.6635

Zahlia walks back onto the balcony, fully dressed this time, and takes another look at her surroundings.
Whatever this place is its far from home, if it’s even in the same world at all.
Either way, there’s something odd with this place.
She walks back to the table and picks up the drink, pops the cork again and takes another whiff.
Still the same strange sweet smell.
She walks back to the bed and sits down, just to make sure she won’t be collapsing on the stone floor.
For a moment Zahlia considers what she’s about to do, then shrugs it off and gulps the stuff down in one go.
You might as well call me Alice now, I just hope my wonderland is just as harmless.
She mumbles while she feels the unknown liquid reaching her stomach.
Zahlia waits for a moment half expecting she just drugged herself, but nothing happens.

Just as she is about to stand up again a wave of heat originating from her stomach hits her, she feels it travel down to her womb right before she is blinded by a white flash.
It takes a few seconds before her eyes adjust as she notices she’s no longer in that room.
All she sees around her is bright white light, that and a shadowy figure not far away from her.
No longer controlling her own body Zahlia gets closer and closer to it.
Now being only about 10 meters away from the figure things become clear.
Judging by the figure’s shape it’s clearly a woman standing with her back towards Zahlia.
She ogles the woman’s well shaped butt and wide hips while she is still getting closer.
‘Damn, those hips are as wide as those found on any fertility goddess!’ Zahlia thinks while a spark of jealousy ignites inside her.
Zahlia’s guess wasn’t far off.
Now with only a few meters between them the woman finally turns around showing a belly so swollen that there have to be more than quadruplets in there.
Yet, that is not where Zahlia’s awe, and jealousy, ends.
On top of that gorgeous pregnant belly a pair of breasts rest befitting of the belly underneath, easily a pair of F-cups Zahlia guesses.
For way too long than would be considered socially acceptable Zahlia ogles every shape of the woman’s body.
From the wide hips, just made for breeding; To the swollen belly, dutifully gestating the blessing that is life.
And lastly, the massive udders resting on top, full of milk yet strangely firm.
Embrace your destiny. The woman suddenly says with a somewhat familiar voice.
Broken out of her trance finally looks up to see the woman’s face.
Right as her sight fades away she manages to catch a glimpse, both shocking her as well as… well… exciting her?
For the face she just saw, was her very own.

Groaning as if she just woke up after partaking in the party of a lifetime, Zahlia opens her eyes and finds herself on the same bed she woke up on earlier that day.
Many hours have passed looking at sun which now is close to setting.
Unlike the morning after partying all night, she feels fine aside from a light case of short-lived dizziness as she quickly gets on her feet and starts searching the room for food.
Drugged or not, she’s definitely hungry after not eating for nearly a day.
Yet, while she’s opening drawers and inspecting every centimeter of the room, her thoughts are elsewhere.
What is this place? Where am I? And why did she look like that in her… dream?
The latter occupied her mind the most.
Thinking about the knocked up and ‘matured’ version of herself was making her strangely moist between her legs.
Sure, she was like most women up for eventually popping a child or 2 one day, but Zahlia had never really looked forward to the process.
Yet, she found the swollen version of herself very alluring.
Maybe it’s not that bad after all? she thought.
While warming up to the prospect of growing round with child, her mind was so occupied she almost completely ignored an item laying in the back of the last drawer she could find.
It was a rectangle about 40cm long and about 8cm wide and thick, clearly made of metal with intricate carvings all over it except for the top and bottom.
At the top there was a lock needing some ancient type of key.
Now having searched every nook and cranny of the room, Zahlia also grabs one of the silken blankets laying on the bed.
She ties both ends together and let the knot rest on her right shoulder while the bottom part rests against her left hip, making it a makeshift bag to carry her new ‘treasure’ in for now.

Having searched the entire room Zahlia decides to move on in the hopes to find a meal somewhere else.
Carelessly, she swings open the double doors and strolls into the hallway it reveals.
There are a few more doors in the hallway, however all of them seem to be locked so she just moves on in the one direction she can go, forward.
She rounds a few corners until she finally reaches what looks like a main hall.
Many other hallways also converge into this hall which has some large stairs on one side and a big golden double-door on the other.
As she rounds the corner Zahlia also notices a hooded figure standing near the golden doors.
Shocked to find someone in this abandoned palace, Zahlia quickly moves back into the hallway hoping the mystery man hasn’t seen her yet.

What is Zahlia going to do?

Option 1: walk up to the mysterious person and see what’s going on.

Option 2: Sneak up to the mysterious person and try to slip by.

Option 3: try to go up the stairs and see what’s there.


Perk Unlocked:

Mythical fertility: Zahlia has unlocked a new state of fertility. She will always conceive after sex, however she can only carry one child per species at a time.

Loaded 1: Zahlia can now support 2 pregnancies at a time. (Can be upgraded)


Preggophillia: +5

Zahlia has seen a glimpse of what could be and she’s warming up to the prospect of it.


Survivability: -5

While Zahlia did have a drink, quenching her thirst. (+5)
She also hasn’t eaten in quite some time. (-10)

Character sheet:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/2txwihp8nrbgmpp/Character%20sheet%201.001.html?dl=0

e2e89 No.6636

>>6630
You… I like your reasoning.
You have recieved tribute, enjoy! :P

Also my thanks for the feedback.

91e4f No.6637

Let's check what's up those stairs. If its extensive, let's focus on investigating that, and checking out and searching for what we need. If its just one room, lets confront whoever it is, lets be peaceful though, no need to provoke people

686ac No.6638

Hey, just shouting out here to Lucifer or SD, if/when they read this new CYOA:

If you two aren't going to continue Holly's adventure, would you be willing to release the notes you had?

686ac No.6639

Also, option 3: stairs

e2e89 No.6640

>>6638
SD seems to have vanished and never released his notes to Lucifer.
Fat chance of that happening.
A shame really, but what can you do.

e074d No.6641

>>6640
Worth a shot.

45757 No.6642

>>6640
There are a few notes, but they're incomplete. SD got the Main Quest, Mechanics, and Side Quests complete, but without the completed notes on the Characters, Bestiary and Places, I couldn't really do anything. If you really want the link, give me an email to shoot it to.

45757 No.6643

>>6635
Also, Option 3, because I don't trust anyone. If we're going with Alice in Wonderland logic, ANYONE could be this world's equivalent of the Red Queen, or in his/her employ.

4243f No.6644

>>6643
bthemd@gmail.com, please.

So did SD actually just give up the ghost, or was it a circumstantial thing?

f4d36 No.6645

option 3

45757 No.6646

>>6644
I don't know. Last time I heard from him was January 4th, shortly after we started talking about the handover. I sent him an email the next day, then…. nothing. Anyway, sending the email as soon as I'm done typing this.

21f65 No.6647

Option 3

686ac No.6649

>>6646
Got it. Thanks a bunch!

d99d4 No.6650

option 3

d3afe No.6651

>>6635
Option one because why not

e9225 No.6652

Option 3

e2e89 No.6656

Just a quick update to let you guys know what's up.
I'll close the vote tomorrow and the day after that I'll publish a new part.
While I could get parts up way faster, I think it'll be more beneficial for all of us that I'm not flooding the board with content and get both myself and you all burnt out on the CYOA.

3285a No.6657

Option 3

6fd04 No.6658

well, i'm voting option 1

e2e89 No.6665

Alright, It looks like all people who wanted to have cast their vote.
So hereby I'm closing the vote, option 3 has won by a landslide.
You can expect a new part tomorrow.

e2e89 No.6667

>>6665
Because of personal issues I might not be able to complete the third part today.
Most of it has been done already and I will try to get it done, but don't be surprised if it is released tomorrow.

e2e89 No.6682

With her heart pounding in her chest, Zahlia takes a quick yet careful peak around the corner.
The mysterious hooded figure is still there, on exactly the same spot she had seen him for the first time a few minutes ago.
Relieved by the fact that the hooded figure hasn’t seen her yet, or at least doesn’t seem to care about her presence, calms Zahlia’s nerves a little.
Better steer clear of him for now, maybe I can find a path around him upstairs. She mumbles in herself.
She takes a deep breath and b-lines it for one of the pillars supporting the roof resting on top of the massive hall, all while hoping the shady character at the door doesn’t pick up on her movement. Quickly moving from pillar to pillar ever closer to the stairs, relative safety in her mind.
Once in a while she checks back to see if the hooded figure has reacted to her prowling, but every time he doesn’t seem to move at all.
That is, until Zahlia was just about to reach the top of the stairs.
Looking back one more time she now sees the he has turned around in her direction.
Slightly panicked she rushes up the last few steps and runs through a door which is slightly ajar.
Stumbling through it with all the finesse and elegance of a young woman partaking in a marathon while wearing high heels for the first time in her life.


She closes the door in a more silent manner hoping the hooded man won’t find her here.
As she tries to catch her breath a bit and let her eyes adjust to the barely lit room.
In front of her she sees a massive room filled with rows of giant bookcases all completely stocked with all kinds of books.
In awe of the size of the library Zahlia starts to explore the place.
The books have been categorized neatly on genre, but have not been touched for a long time as thick layers of dust cover every single book she comes across.
In the fantasy section however, Zahlia finds something suspicious.
A quite thick yet compact untitled book with a yellow cover is completely dust free while the other books next to it are not.
Quietly she pries the book off of the shelve and opens it.
Ah! One of my favorites! It’s about some wizard living in an emerald city at the end of a yellow brick road. A voice behind her suddenly says.
Startled by someone creeping up on her she throws the book up in the air and turns around to see who’s there, yet no one was there.
No one, besides the book she just held floating in the air.
Unable to move while her brain processes the idea of a talking magical book floating in the air, the book gently floats back and put’s itself back where it belongs.
Or so it seems for Zahlia.


Finally regaining control of her body she looks at the book and fires a barrage of questions.
Wh… what are you? How did you c.. come to life? What do y… you want?
After a short moment of silence she suddenly hears that same voice behind her again.
It answers none of her questions, it just laughs.
Angrily she turns around while the laughing continues, then her a blush appears on her face as she finally realized how hilarious her stammering to a book must have looked.
Silently she accepts this ‘thing’ enjoying her stupidity, whatever it is.
While the creature is laughing it out, Zahlia tries to catch a glimpse of it.
At first without any success, but when she squints her eyes and focuses on the voice Zahlia finally gets she glimpse she’s looking for.
About a meter away from her she can just barely see what seems like a ghastly appearance constantly slightly fluctuating in form yet always seems to have the core shape of a man.


After what seemed like an eternity of getting shamed, the ghastly man finally stops laughing and starts showing his serious side.
Pardon my manners, that was just the best reaction I’ve ever could have wished for.
My name is Elos, your friendly neighborhood Shade and for what I want from you, well… the same as anyone around here wants.
But there are better places than here to discuss such things, might I perhaps invite you back to my study?
After all, by the looks of your reaction you seem to be new here and probably have a lot of questions.


While not completely comfortable with just sheepishly following a strange ghastly creature, he hadn’t attacked her yet and some answers would be nice Zahlia figured.
It isn’t easy following Elos around the library which by now has become nearly pitch black as the sun has set completely, leaving the couple only with the light of the moon.
After rounding a few corners Elos leads her into a small room bordering the large library and offers her a chair.
Zahlia isn’t even sitting yet or she’s already firing a barrage of questions, Elos in the meantime just sits and waits for Zahlia to finish.
Now I did promise you answers and I’m a man of my word so answers you shall have, yet not all knowledge goes for free.
However, let’s start with what I will share for free.
You are currently at the royal palace, the political center of the Principality of Nymeria.
Once a small independent state ruling over the fertile Nymar valley, with its independence guaranteed solely by this very city, the great city of Nymar.
It’s positioning at the river Nymer allowed it to amass ridiculous amounts of wealth, securing a bright future for its people.
Yet that future never came to be, its inhabitants vanished without a trace.
Now, many different creatures roam the streets of Nymar and the surrounding valley.
Many friendly, yet most of them deadly.
So be warned my dear, whether you strike a deal with me or not; Always be careful with what you do.
That is all what the records I found have told me so far.
Elos says, being just as gentlemanly as before. It didn’t cover everything Zahlia wants to know, but it’s a start.


Alright, that was useful, but what is this deal you keep talking about? What do you want from me? Zahlia asks having her interest piqued by this Shade.
It’s facial features are hard to make out, but for a moment Zahlia sees what seems to be a broad wicked smile appearing on Elos’ face.
My lord, you really are new here! Alright then, let me bring you up to speed.
Most of the creatures you’ll find out there are males, and the females that are around can’t reproduce with some ‘help’.
Thus, everyone here is after one thing only, your womb.
Without girls like you, who appear once in a while, most of us would go extinct within a century or two.
Now, the deal I propose is that you give me a child, in return I will answer 3 of your questions.
It might not seem like much, but knowledge is survival around here.
So if you want to avoid becoming someone’s breeding slave then I suggest you strike a deal.''
The answer did shock Zahlia a litte, yet not too much since it did explain her strange ‘vision’ she had earlier.
While popping out kids for strangers she’s just met isn’t exactly alluring to her, it might be a good idea to go for it if this world really is as dangerous as Elos proclaims.

Preggophillia score required: 10
Current preggophillia score: 8

Option 1: Refuse for now and confront the hooded man

Option 2: Refuse for now and try to sneak past the hooded man

Option 3: Bargain for a better deal


If the bargain is successful Zahlia will automatically accept the improved deal, but also remember that if it fails the deal will become worse.
Also, in order to keep the story at a decent pace, I would like to know which one of options 1 & 2 you prefer.
Therefore, it’s a double vote.
You can choose to bargain or not, if you choose to bargain then also choose one of the above options.

Then there are also some other issues I wish to settle.
Firstly, I remember SD's kelpie scene not being very popular.
Since I'm using mythological creatures, some creatures might be very similar to the Kelpie.
I will use some of these creatures for sure, however I still would like to know your stance on it.
If there are a lot of people against this kind of content then I will keep it at a limited level.
Lastly, I have decided to post one part a week every Friday for now.
I have other things to take care of as well and it takes a lot more time to write these stories than you might expect.

Character sheet: https://www.dropbox.com/s/2txwihp8nrbgmpp/Character%20sheet%201.001.html?dl=0

851a4 No.6683

>>6682
That's a lot of work you put into such an early chapter. Kudos!

> It’s about some wizard living in an emerald city at the end of a yellow brick road.

And I feel honored to already have a little cameo role :-)


Anyway… voting!
> Option 2.
Zahlia is described as tomboyish. I imagine her to be the sort of person who is adventurous but needs to see some of this world for herself before she believes any of Elos' wild claims.
And of course I'm hoping that by the time she comes crawling back to him, she will agree to a bigger litter from him and/or already have a bun in the oven ;-)

851a4 No.6684

>>6682
Oh right, kelpies and stuff. I'm okay with how Holly's last few scenes went. Although I don't like the idea of creatures that are too anatomically different like the spiders for example. Cross species sex is one thing, but if the other species doesn't even have the right body parts for it, it becomes just too weird for me.

f930c No.6685

Option 2. Hopefully the hooded man catches and breeds her

48978 No.6686

option 2

I personally don't mind the cross species sex. Mythological stories are full of that stuff anyway, so I don't see any reason to take it out.

d99d4 No.6687

option 2

not really a fan of the kelpie thing btw.

c6b28 No.6688

Option 3 and 1

0b7ec No.6693


e2e89 No.6695

>>6683
Thank you very kindly dear sir, it's always nice to have your efforts noted.

You're most welcome, I was hoping you'd pick up on the hint. :P
It's not the only easter egg I put in this part though.

e6e69 No.6697

>>6695
You mean like Elos being an anagram of Sole? :) Also a nice one.

f4d36 No.6698

option 3

45757 No.6707

>>6682
I feel like the reason SD's story didn't go too well is it went a little too fast. So I'm going with 2 as well.

As for the Mythological creatures thing… I'll say the same thing I did to SD. If there's transformation, let's try and stay with two arms, two legs, etc. Other than that, it's your story, we're just giving our input on how it should go. >>6684 has the right idea, honestly.

Speaking of >>6683/4…. I'd imagine that the preggophilia stat is out of 100 given that it started at 5 and 10 is needed for a deal. So unless we were to go WAY far afield before returning, I suspect that Z will only be willing to take the deal, not ask for a bigger litter. As for already having a bun in her oven? Well, that depends on the rest of her adventures.

686ac No.6709

I'm voting option 1. Maybe Zahlia wants to see if 'Elos' is telling the truth, and she can probably run away if things get serious.

As for the mythological creatures stuff, I'm quite interested in cross-species impregnation, and whether it's by sex like the kelpie or Sole, or item/location like the conch or flower, it's all good to me.

Transformation-wise, I'd side with Lucifer, at least for mechanical reasons. Probably wouldn't be fun to have to write around being a taur or something. Getting wolf ears and a tail, bat or bee wings, fangs, or other aesthetic and ability-related differences that don't majorly impact capability sound great to me, though.

45757 No.6714

>>6709
Ironically, just about the only transformation I would be OKAY with would be taur…. since it's another belly to fill with kids!

e2e89 No.6715

>>6707 >>6709

I can guarantee you there will be no real transformations, only body extension. Bringing in transformations that change the actual anatomy will just cause Zahlia to turn into a Kronenberg creature, and I doubt anyone is into that sort of stuff.

>>6707
I believe I did mention it at the start, but bargaining will slightly lower the preggophillia requirement since it makes the deal more tempting for Zahlia to take.
I will only allow bargaining to be picked when the gap preggophillia wise can be bridged.
However, do keep in mind that the beauty score I set might not be high enough for Zahlia to successfully bargain.


>>6697
Damn, nothing slips by you does it?
Looks like I have to make things a bit more subtle in the future ;P

974a2 No.6716

>>6714
Ah. Guess I was thrown off by the 'two arms, two legs, etc.' Sorry for misinterpreting. I just feel that gaining a mermaid tail or something would become more trouble than it's worth, you know? And yeah, taur would add more capacity, strength, etc, but lower maneuverability, rubbing potential, etc.

e2e89 No.6734

I'm closing the vote, option 2 won.
you can expect the next part somewhere tomorrow.

d99d4 No.6740

yo, everything cool?

e2e89 No.6741

>>6740
Yeah, no worries.
I'm just making some revisions to the planned paths, so the part is slightly delayed.
I will try to finish it tonight, otherwise I promise it's there tomorrow.

d99d4 No.6742

no worries, just making sure everything is alright.

e2e89 No.6743

Complete silence has taken over the room; on one end Zahlia mulling over the proposition, on the other end Elos waiting at the mercy of Zahlia.
For a few moments it stays that way until Zahlia finally answers.
no she says to Elos’ surprise.
I can’t argue that information would be a nice thing to have when wandering a strange world like this, but I’m not just going to give you a child in return for it.Zahlia elaborates.
While she’s not able to see much of a Elos’ face, for a moment Zahlia catches a glimpse of disappointed look.
Feeling a bit guilty for reasons she can’t really explain Zahlia quickly promises that in the future she still might take him up on his offer.
Acting composed and gentlemanly as ever Elos nods and stands up.
In that case I suppose there’s not else for you to do here. I wish you best of luck on your Nymerian adventure, just remember if you change your mind regarding our deal you can find me here. Elos says as he opens the door for Zahlia.

As the door behind her is closed Zahlia finds herself alone in the library once again.
She strolls casually back to the hallway leading to the stairs, just as she enters the hallway however Zahlia curses when she remembers that creepy guy downstairs.
Really not looking forward to approaching him Zahlia enters panic mode, she quickly glances at the stairs to make sure he’s not right there and checks if she can perhaps find a way around him through one of the other rooms accessible from that hallway.
This time however, she doesn’t have luck on her side; none of the doors seem to be unlocked.
Again she curses as she leans against the brilliant white marble wall of which most of the palace seems to have been made. Zahlia closes her eyes and takes some deep breaths in the hope to calm herself down.
To some degree it works; her panic disappears, yet her nerves stay.

Giving up on the idea of finding another way around the hooded man, Zahlia accepts the challenge and starts her descent down the stairs.
Before she rounds the corner, Zahlia quickly peeks in the hope the hooded man has finally left.
To her dismay, that is not the case.
Once again she finds him standing near the only exit with his back towards her.
She takes a deep breath in a failing attempt to suppress her nerves and starts to sneak towards the exit.
Zahlia counts 20 pillars in between her and the hooded man.
Every pillar she manages to sneak up unseen, closer and closer to the man increases her heartrate right up the point it feels like it’s stuck up her throat when she arrives at the last pillar.
The hooded man is now only about 15 meters away from her, yet the door is a bit further.
This close to the man she finally sees that he’s not just staring at a wall, but actually reading something etched into the wall.
The script however is unknown to Zahlia, regardless if she can read it or not her primal instinct tells her that she should keep moving to avoid danger.
Ah! There you finally are, I’ve been waiting for hours for you to appear! Oh no worries, I won’t hurt you.
If I wanted to I’d have done so way earlier, so please come. I have something for you. A manly yet pleasant voice said right after Zahlia had started to sneak towards the door.
Frozen in fear she looks at the hooded figure only to find him staring right at her.
To her surprise the ‘creepy figure’ doesn’t look so creepy from this distance.
He looks like a well build man somewhere in his twenties with brown hair and a friendly smile, the only unsettling thing about him are his eyes.
Unlike any normal man, his iris isn’t the standard brown, blue or green; instead his iris has a deep red colour.


Still frozen on the same spot Zahlia looks at the man for a few seconds before quickly glancing at the open door.
Before Zahlia even has the chance to make a run for it, the man make a gesture at the door and it closes straight away.
Please don’t make this any harder than it needs to be.
All I want is a chat and I’ll let you be on your merry way.
He says hoping she finally gives in.
With her only exit blocked off Zahlia indeed gives in and walks up to the man, still with her heart pounding in her throat.
As she walks over to him he scans her entire body before softly mumbling something.
Zahlia can’t quite pick it up, but she thinks she heard the word promising and master somewhere in there.

Before Zahlia could even start asking questions the man starts his ‘chat’.
Alright, listen up, since it took you so damn long to get her I don’t have much time.
I am the guy in charge of new arrivals here, but for reasons I don’t have time to explain right now I didn’t have time to drop off some stuff for you before you started to wander.
So here it is. Normally, I also answer a bunch of questions you might have, but that will have to wait for now.
If you really are in need of some answers I suggest you go to the Maela’s place at the courtyard.
Alright, I got to go now, see you around!
Before Zahlia was even able to ask any questions the man quickly left the palace, leaving her with a small bundle of cloth containing a rolled up piece of parchment and a weird blue fruit.
The blue fruit has about the same size and texture as an apple, yet it is nearly perfectly round with a deep blue colour.
After the experience with the strange drink however, Zahlia decides it’s probably better to find a safe spot before eating that regardless of her being quite hungry by now.
With the man finally gone, Zahlia can finally exit the palace.
She steps outside onto the courtyard, there are several ways for her to go.

Which path does she take?

Option 1: The temple

Option 2: The stables

Option 3: Leave the palace and roam the streets of Nymar

Survivability:
Zahlia still hasn't eaten anything: -5%

Character sheet: https://www.dropbox.com/s/e5tv0bkevzrrus5/Character%20sheet%201.002.html?dl=0

My apologies for being so late and not letting you guys know.
I was reworking the story a bit before it really starts, so all my spare time went into that instead.
Furthermore, I have not added the items Zahlia got in the character sheet.
These will be inspected/used in the next part, no worries!

29109 No.6744

Option 2

f0ebf No.6745

>>6743
Option one.

And a suggestion: Please use quotation marks. It makes speech much easier to read (especially if more than one person is talking) than merely italics.

fa5d6 No.6746

Definitely the stables. Bring on the breeding

e2e89 No.6747

>>6745
Noted! In order to get italics you have to use quotation marks already, so I'll have to find a way around that though.
Might just cut out the italics all together.

f0ebf No.6748

>>6747
Huh? Quotation marks cause italics? "test"

f0ebf No.6749

>>6748
No, they don't…

21f65 No.6750

Option 1

e2e89 No.6752

>>6748
My bad, it's not quotation marks, but two apostrophes.
I'm not really on my game today alright…

f12b2 No.6753

I'm leaning towards option 1.

1ee66 No.6754

Option two

c9129 No.6755

Option 3. The stable might have a horse or something to let us book it out of here, but it might be good to look around for supplies.

a5993 No.6757

Option 1, and eat the blue apple

d5085 No.6758

I vote two, and eat the apple.

011b4 No.6759

>>6758
I vote this

f0ebf No.6760

>>6755
Horse, schmorse… We're in a desert city, I want a flying carpet!

10995 No.6761

The temple. Faith and prayer can pay dividends in scenarios like these, and if we get very very lucky our first child is a demigod.

45757 No.6763

>>6757
Seconded.
>>6760
YAAAAAS.

f4d36 No.6764

>>6763
>>6757
i third this

e2e89 No.6770

I'm closing the vote option 1 has won.

>>6760
Your wish might be granted… Sometime. :P

e2e89 No.6774

>>6770
Once again I'm going to have to delay sadly.
The next part is well underway, but still needs some more work which I won't be able to do today.
I expect finishing it off tomorrow is most likely, but who knows; Maybe I'll find some extra time later tonight ;P

e2e89 No.6779

A cold chill ran down Zahlia’s spine while she looked around the courtyard.
It was barely illuminated by the bleak light the moon had to offer, giving it an eerie feeling in combination with the cold touch of the nighttime desert.
Already being creeped out by the courtyard Zahlia didn’t even want to think about what might stalk the city streets at night, this left her with 2 options; Either the temple or the stables.
Initially drawn to the stables in the hope she’d find some hay to sleep on; That was until she saw a dim orange glow escaping the stables around the edges of the door.
Not interested in meeting more of the somewhat ‘whacky’ inhabitants of Nymar for now, Zahlia quickly turned around and decided to go the temple.
The only place that seemed not entirely creepy and was shrouded in the darkness of the night, promising sweet solitude for at least a while.

The large golden gilded doors slowly opened with a slight squeak, revealing a temple quite similar to those she’d seen while visiting the Egyptian city of Luxor.
Large pillars at least 12 meters high held the roof around the inner courtyard in place and beautiful drawings telling stories of old covered every single wall she could find.
The moonlight lit up a pond in the middle of the courtyard which was overgrown with large exotic flowers unknown to Zahlia.

With the cold now really starting to cool her down Zahlia quickly moved on deeper into the temple.
After the next set of large golden doors Zahlia found solitude at last, the room was completely closed off from the outside except for some small windows high up on the walls.
Tired and hungry Zahlia decided to just take it, the place was a bit warmer than outside and didn’t seem to harbour anyone else.
She grabbed a piece of thin silk from one of the smaller altars and settled in a corner trying to get some rest.
The attempt was rather unsuccessful however, as she was constantly reminded by her stomach of her hunger.
She grabbed the strange fruit and looked at it with distrust, if her last experience hadn’t been so strange she probably would have eaten it right when she got it.
Yet it seems there’s no more ways to delay, her stomach growled violently as the sweet smell of the fruit intensified the feeling of hunger.
Dreading her situation she finally took a bite of the fruit which was unsurprisingly just as sweet as the smell it had.
Zahlia managed to devour the entire thing within a minute or 2, strangely satisfied she leaned back as she felt the bits of fruit settle in her stomach.
Not much later the same strange warmth she had felt from the drink earlier that day also started to spread from her stomach.
This time however, the warmth went towards her hips and backside instead.
Unlike last time however, she wasn’t dragged violently into another vision.
Instead with the comfort of a full stomach and the effect it provided she settled in her corner only to fall into a deep sleep.

While the fruit did not give her another vision, it certainly did taint her dreams.
In her dream she found herself back in the temple’s courtyard.
Unlike what she had seen before, the courtyard had come to life.
The plants which were all cropped up around the pond when she passed through there had now spread it’s tendrils throughout the courtyard and even more of these exotic plants had popped up further away from the center. Entranced by the beautiful colours of the flowers Zahlia at first did not notice the moaning coming from near the pond.
It took her a while to locate the person amongst the jungle of tendrils, leaves, and flowers, but eventually she found the source of the moaning.
A young woman leaning on all fours enjoying one of the thicker tendrils penetrating her womanhood.
Strangely enticed by the sight Zahlia watches from distance, feeling her nipples harden and her slit moistening at the sight of this thick firm tendril sliding in and out of her love tunnel.
For a few minutes Zahlia was able to enjoy the strange unlikely mates breeding.
The air was filed with the constant moaning of the woman whenever the tendril slid deeper inside of her while her breasts jiggled back and forth in unity with the rest of her body.
Suddenly the woman releases the loudest moan so far and pushes her upper body down while pushing her ass up, the tendril’s movement slows down until it came to a complete halt.
For a few moments Zahlia was confused at the current events, until she noticed how the tendril has small bulges traveling towards the woman’s stretched womanhood.
Whether it was actual seeds or just globs of semen Zahlia did not know, regardless of that fact she found it strangely appealing.
Not much later the tendril retreated back to the plant it was a part of leaving the recently inseminated woman exhausted on the ground.
Being the good natured girl Zahlia is she immediately approached the woman to help her up.
A good gesture, yet it turned out an unnecessary one as well.
Right before Zahlia reached the woman she came back to life and got up on her own.
At this point Zahlia had gotten so close she was pretty much face to face with the woman.
Unsurprisingly, the woman seemed quite surprised by Zahlia’s sudden appearance, however not for the reasons one would think.
“My lord, has your mother never thought you a woman’s womb should never be empty? Or don’t you agree bulging with someone’s spawn like this, is the best thing in life?” the woman said while she grabbed Zahlia’s hands and put them on her own maternal belly for Zahlia to explore.
Where the huge belly had suddenly come from puzzeled Zahlia for a minute, she could have sworn the woman had a completely flat belly less than a minute ago.
Normally Zahlia would just retract her hands and kindly reject the offer, however this time she couldn’t put herself to it.
She found the touch of the stretched tanned skin, combined with the firmness of her belly surprisingly alluring.
With joy Zahlia ran her hands along the rounding of this woman’s bulging belly until she suddenly whispered something in Zahlia’s ear.
“Go fulfill your duty Zahlia, it’s your destiny.” She said right as Zahlia started to wake up again.

Once again the sun had risen, promising another day full of maternal adventure.
Yet that adventure was going to start sooner than Zahlia had expected.
“Well hi there! About time you woke up darling.” A feminine voice right in front of her said.
Shocked by the unexpected company Zahlia looked up only to find yet another surprise.
A woman stood right in front of Zahlia.
She was relatively long with a tanned skin found on most Arab people, her hair was pitch black and her eyes deep brown.
Furthermore, she had a fairly sizable pair of mammaries and a swollen pregnant belly which looked like she was about to give birth.
That however, was not the most surprising part.
This woman was the woman she saw in her dream.
“Come on darling, are you just going to sit and stare all day? Breakfast isn’t going to serve itself and by the looks of you I’d say you could definitely use some.” The woman said after Zahlia had been staring at her for a while.
With a lot of effort the woman managed to herd Zahlia back to the court yard while introducing herself and inquiring about Zahlia.
Her name was Maela and she too just woke up at the palace one day with no clue what had happened.
After wandering the streets of the city for a while she eventually just settled in the temple with her ‘friends’ where she’s been living ever since.



Time to let your own creativity flow, I'm not giving any options this time.
This part can be used to collect some information on Zahlia's surroundings and what might be encountered in the future.
The three most popular questions will be answered if it is possible for Maela to know the answer.
You may both submit a question and vote for another. If you aren't submitting a question then I'll give you 2 votes.

Survivability: +10%
''Preggophillia: +7 (Is now 15)
''Beauty: +5 (Zahlia will discover the change in the next part.)

Character sheet:https://www.dropbox.com/s/2il2wamacxmeq1i/Character%20sheet%201.003.html?dl=0

A few things to note.
I have changed the writings style a bit, the switch from present to past tense is probably the most notable.
I prefer to write in the past tense, so it should create a better experience for you all.
Also, before people point it out. I am well aware I did not describe what the fruit exactly did to Zahlia, no worries I'll cover that next time.

e2e89 No.6780

>>6779
Oh and I'm also experimenting with the italics and the quotation marks.
I'm not really fond of doing it like in this part, so I expect to change that next time.

fc74c No.6786

>>6779
Considering that she is still completely new, I want Zahlia to ask:
"Do you know a way back home?" (meaning earth if Maela answers that she considers Nymeria her home)
"Is the temple a safe place?" (i.e. will Zahlia be in danger of being raped here)
"How did this world came to be the way it is?" (i.e. was it always the case that they had to rely on human females for reproduction? If not, what changed?)
as well as
"Where can I buy a flying carpet?" ;-)

37397 No.6795

Ask "How long have you been pregnant?"

21f65 No.6797

Ask about the city and town.

21f65 No.6798

Sorry. Meant temple

0cb1f No.6801

Lets, for a little bit of a conversation starter, begin to flirt with the woman, and ask about her general life. Afterall, we do want to become pregnant ourselves, so lets show a pregnant woman some love.

Next question, after buttering her up a bit, "Is this temple a safe place, and what is its purpose?"

Last question, ask for some general information about the surronding area, and the temple. Whats in the stables?

Good CYOA btw, really liking the pacing so far

7ede6 No.6802

>>6801
Vote for this

68a11 No.6805

1. Who are you?

2. What are the areas surrounding here?

3. Any people/places to look/watch out for?

d99d4 No.6806

>>6801
I second this

e2e89 No.6811

I'm closing the vote >>6801 has won.
By the slow and few reactions I'd call a write in like this not really a success. In the future I'll see if I can refine it to make it more engaging and encourage more people to put their ideas in.

>>6801 Also, thank you kindly sir. I do my best to make it as enjoyable as possible, it's nice to recieve confirmation I'm doing good.

The next part should be out tomorrow, but by now it should be pretty obvious that I'm not always able to deliver on that promise.

c0b10 No.6812

>>6811
I think the problem, if I could say so myself, was the pure broadness of it. I think if you had led us along, with the woman giving us a topic, to which we could respond, would have been better. Just my thoughts, personally

f12b2 No.6814

>>6811

I agree with the anon in 6812. It's a problem that I've run into while DMing before, giving the players to much leeway that they become paralyzed by indecision (not that i'm advocating for heavy railroading, but we need options to guide us).

I think for this update, giving us options like :
1.) ask about Maela's history
2.) ask about city
3.) ask about the other residents
4.) ask about the items that have been given to us/foisted on us
5.) ask a different question
would have kept a lot of the freeform that you were looking for (especially if you tell us to be as specific as we want) while shaping our ideas in a way that could have been more useful to you as the CYOAmaster.

e6f71 No.6819

>>6814
This is a good strategy. Giving us vague choices on which we can base our own votes always helps, since it gives people a general idea of how to respond.

e2e89 No.6820

>>6814
Thank you for the advice, I'll keep it in mind whenever I'll throw in another write in.

I'm working on the story right now, unless something enexpected comes my way it should be released today.
>>6814

e2e89 No.6825

“So eh… Maela… How did you manage to end up here at this place?’’
“I know you woke up here one day just like me, but why settle at this temple?” Zahlia asked, being plagued by her overzealous sense of curiosity.
Maela stayed silent for a while, trying to formulate an answer.
“Bare necessity I suppose. For a while I was just exploring the city, looking for a way out.”
“One day those blasted jackal… things… caught my scent again and chased me through the entire city.’’
Eventually I managed to flee here in the hopes they’d leave me alone.’’
“I was a fool to believe they would, but luckily one of the locals, who is now my mate, stepped in and cracked some skulls.’’
“Ever since, those jackals haven’t dared show their faces around the palace.’’
“Plus my mate fulfills my every need, unlike most of the locals around here.“

“Yeah I can see you’re well taken care of” Zahlia replied nodding towards the massive round shape that was Maela’s belly.
In return Malea cracked a smile and teased Zahlia, causing her to blush. “Oh no worries girl, we can get you all set up with a bun of your own in no time!”
“Maybe, we’ll see about that later.” Zahlia retaliated with a lewd expression on her face, causing both to laugh.

“Anyhow, what is this place anyways? I mean, I know it’s a temple, but a temple to worship what exactly?” Zahlia asked, still not having satisfied her curiousity.
“I don’t really know to be honest.”
“My guess at what those stories you find all over the temple exactly tell is just as good as yours really.”
“From the few depictions I’ve found, mixed with some common sense, I’d say these people worshipped the river flowing through these lands.”
“After all, it is one of the few, if not the only, thing allowing life to exist around here.”
“I’ve also found some carvings and statues of some really hung creatures and very gravid women.”
“So I’d say they found fertility really important, but unless I find a Rosetta’s stone around here somewhere there’s no way to know for sure.”
“Either way, I seem to be doing a good job at keeping the local religion alive.” Maela answered while patting her swollen midriff.
“I see, and what about the stables on the other side of the courtyard then?’’
“ I saw there was some light coming from the place last night, anything interesting there?’’ Zahlia asked as she was continuing her investigation.
“Oh that’s just Markus.’’
“The poor bastard had his junk cut off at some point, without the tools to fulfill the goal every damn male around here seems to have he’s settled down there and has taken it upon himself to take care of his ‘friends’ instead.’’
“He’s helped me out restoring the place a little, sadly my mate isn’t too mobile outside of the courtyard. So I had to ask Markus instead, but I can’t say I know him that well.’’
“He’s harmless though.”
`
Still not satisfied with the amount of information she got Zahlia kept the barrage of questions going, at this point however they had reached the courtyard so Maela cut it off.
“Relax girl, you’ll have plenty of time to ask more questions.’’
“For now though, I’d like you to meet my mate and my children.” At first Zahlia was quite confused as Maela pointed at the overgrown garden.
For a few moments she scanned the garden, concentrating on finding a person or a creature.
Then she remembered what she saw in a dream, cursing her own stupidity she only answered with an “Oooooohh….”.
Maela took it surprisingly lightly, being the second person in Nymeria now to laugh at Zahlia’s derpiness.

Maela led her to a patio somewhere at the right side of the garden, the place was quite comfortable.
There were plenty soft pillows to sit on and the shade made the scorching desert heat bearable.
Maela served several types of fruit, all of them unknown to Zahlia yet strangely similar to some she did know.
After her previous experiences Zahlia was rather distrustful towards the strange fruits, and only after Maela had promised her nothing would happen she dared to take a bite.
They were all very juicy, sweet and completely seedless, the latter allowed the entire fruit to be eaten in a few large bites.
Yet it did make Zahlia wonder why none of them had any seeds in them, being the derp she is Zahlia asked Maela straight away.
She had barely asked the question before Zahlia blushed and once again cursed her stupidity.
Maela had noticed and was quite amused with it, laughing she patted her round belly again and told her that their seeds do not grow in dirt.
“You know, I’m actually kind of sad to see you still have such a flat belly.”
“Why is it you still don’t have a bun in the oven darling?’’
“I mean, you do have the hips to support a pregnancy or two.”
“I tell you what, why don’t you give my mate something back.”
“I’m sure that he’ll welcome you back anytime you need food and rest if you pop a podling for him.”
Maela’s sudden suggestion startled Zahlia for sure, yet it did seem to make more and more sense the longer she thought about it.
Furthermore, Maela’s slight obsession for Zahlia’s hips made her aware that her skirt had gotten a bit tighter than she remembered it was.
To her surprise her hips seem to have grown overnight, a side effect of yesterday’s dinner she imagined.
What were once hips who could usually be found on a guy, had been transformed to be wider and curvier like that on a girl far in her puberty.
“Why do you care so much about me being pregnant or not?” Zahlia asked in return.
In response Maela cracked a smile and said “Well, let’s just say that ILikePregnancy.”
“But what do you say? I promise it will feel good from conception to birth.”

Survivability: +20% (100%) Zahlia has been able to eat up completely.

What is our not so maternal Zahlia going to do?:
Option 1: Go for a roll in the hay with Maela’s mate
Option 2: Go to the stables
Option 3: Explore the city

AUTHOR'S NOTE:
In order to try and get the community to be more involved in this CYOA I'm going to throw in easter eggs honoring those people.
Some of those easter eggs will be quite obvious (like in this part) and some of them will be a bit harder to find (like the one for The Wizard Of Oz).
If you contribute enough I will put you in for sure, so if you want to be referenced in this CYOA then get yourself an username and start contributing.
To make things clear, by contributing I generally mean leaving more than just your vote in the comment section.
Great examples of this are The Wizard of Oz, ILikePregnancy, and Call Me Lucifer (You're up next buddy).

e2e89 No.6826

“So eh… Maela… How did you manage to end up here at this place?’’
“I know you woke up here one day just like me, but why settle at this temple?” Zahlia asked, being plagued by her overzealous sense of curiosity.
Maela stayed silent for a while, trying to formulate an answer.
“Bare necessity I suppose. For a while I was just exploring the city, looking for a way out.”
“One day those blasted jackal… things… caught my scent again and chased me through the entire city.’’
Eventually I managed to flee here in the hopes they’d leave me alone.’’
“I was a fool to believe they would, but luckily one of the locals, who is now my mate, stepped in and cracked some skulls.’’
“Ever since, those jackals haven’t dared show their faces around the palace.’’
“Plus my mate fulfills my every need, unlike most of the locals around here.“

“Yeah I can see you’re well taken care of” Zahlia replied nodding towards the massive round shape that was Maela’s belly.
In return Malea cracked a smile and teased Zahlia, causing her to blush. “Oh no worries girl, we can get you all set up with a bun of your own in no time!”
“Maybe, we’ll see about that later.” Zahlia retaliated with a lewd expression on her face, causing both to laugh.

“Anyhow, what is this place anyways? I mean, I know it’s a temple, but a temple to worship what exactly?” Zahlia asked, still not having satisfied her curiousity.
“I don’t really know to be honest.”
“My guess at what those stories you find all over the temple exactly tell is just as good as yours really.”
“From the few depictions I’ve found, mixed with some common sense, I’d say these people worshipped the river flowing through these lands.”
“After all, it is one of the few, if not the only, thing allowing life to exist around here.”
“I’ve also found some carvings and statues of some really hung creatures and very gravid women.”
“So I’d say they found fertility really important, but unless I find a Rosetta’s stone around here somewhere there’s no way to know for sure.”
“Either way, I seem to be doing a good job at keeping the local religion alive.” Maela answered while patting her swollen midriff.
“I see, and what about the stables on the other side of the courtyard then?’’
“ I saw there was some light coming from the place last night, anything interesting there?’’ Zahlia asked as she was continuing her investigation.
“Oh that’s just Markus.’’
“The poor bastard had his junk cut off at some point, without the tools to fulfill the goal every damn male around here seems to have he’s settled down there and has taken it upon himself to take care of his ‘friends’ instead.’’
“He’s helped me out restoring the place a little, sadly my mate isn’t too mobile outside of the courtyard. So I had to ask Markus instead, but I can’t say I know him that well.’’
“He’s harmless though.”
`
Still not satisfied with the amount of information she got Zahlia kept the barrage of questions going, at this point however they had reached the courtyard so Maela cut it off.
“Relax girl, you’ll have plenty of time to ask more questions.’’
“For now though, I’d like you to meet my mate and my children.” At first Zahlia was quite confused as Maela pointed at the overgrown garden.
For a few moments she scanned the garden, concentrating on finding a person or a creature.
Then she remembered what she saw in a dream, cursing her own stupidity she only answered with an “Oooooohh….”.
Maela took it surprisingly lightly, being the second person in Nymeria now to laugh at Zahlia’s derpiness.

Maela led her to a patio somewhere at the right side of the garden, the place was quite comfortable.
There were plenty soft pillows to sit on and the shade made the scorching desert heat bearable.
Maela served several types of fruit, all of them unknown to Zahlia yet strangely similar to some she did know.
After her previous experiences Zahlia was rather distrustful towards the strange fruits, and only after Maela had promised her nothing would happen she dared to take a bite.
They were all very juicy, sweet and completely seedless, the latter allowed the entire fruit to be eaten in a few large bites.
Yet it did make Zahlia wonder why none of them had any seeds in them, being the derp she is Zahlia asked Maela straight away.
She had barely asked the question before Zahlia blushed and once again cursed her stupidity.
Maela had noticed and was quite amused with it, laughing she patted her round belly again and told her that their seeds do not grow in dirt.
“You know, I’m actually kind of sad to see you still have such a flat belly.”
“Why is it you still don’t have a bun in the oven darling?’’
“I mean, you do have the hips to support a pregnancy or two.”
“I tell you what, why don’t you give my mate something back.”
“I’m sure that he’ll welcome you back anytime you need food and rest if you pop a podling for him.”
Maela’s sudden suggestion startled Zahlia for sure, yet it did seem to make more and more sense the longer she thought about it.
Furthermore, Maela’s slight obsession for Zahlia’s hips made her aware that her skirt had gotten a bit tighter than she remembered it was.
To her surprise her hips seem to have grown overnight, a side effect of yesterday’s dinner she imagined.
What were once hips who could usually be found on a guy, had been transformed to be wider and curvier like that on a girl far in her puberty.
“Why do you care so much about me being pregnant or not?” Zahlia asked in return.
In response Maela cracked a smile and said “Well, let’s just say that ILikePregnancy.”
“But what do you say? I promise it will feel good from conception to birth.”

Survivability: +20% (100%) Zahlia has been able to eat up completely.

What is our not so maternal Zahlia going to do?:
Option 1: Go for a roll in the hay with Maela’s mate
Option 2: Go to the stables
Option 3: Explore the city

Character sheet: https://www.dropbox.com/s/iafvuj2gca8ldow/Character%20sheet%201.004.html?dl=0

AUTHOR'S NOTE:
In order to try and get the community to be more involved in this CYOA I'm going to throw in easter eggs honoring those people.
Some of those easter eggs will be quite obvious (like in this part) and some of them will be a bit harder to find (like the one for The Wizard Of Oz).
If you contribute enough I will put you in for sure, so if you want to be referenced in this CYOA then get yourself an username and start contributing.
To make things clear, by contributing I generally mean leaving more than just your vote in the comment section.
Great examples of this are The Wizard of Oz, ILikePregnancy, and Call Me Lucifer (You're up next buddy).

8f6ec No.6828

Option 1, and let's do a bit of a suggestive move by saying that we want her to join us.

cb55f No.6829

>>6826
Write-in with a twist on option one: Zahlia should ask whether or not the protection Maela enjoys from her bud-dy (yeah, I'm a sucker for bad puns, sue me!) would extend to her too if she agrees to do it. At least while she's in the temple.

In story I think this is reasonable to ask because Zahlia has heard a lot of strange people and "people" telling her how dangerous Nymeria is. The very first person she met wants to fuck her right away and right there. The next one is a mysterious, stalker-y figure whose only quality is that he doesn't want to rape her. And now a story about jackals!? She must be freaked! No matter how much she is enjoying the general attention or the thought of being pregnant herself, in my mind she still has safety on the very top of her priority list.

Outside of story, I think it's nice to have a place to retreat should things get ugly further down the line. A base of operations so to speak.

45757 No.6831

>>6829
Agreed. Also, that pun was bad and you should feel bad. :P

21f65 No.6832

Option 1 and get a supply of food on your way

54b7d No.6837

Option 1

2b018 No.6839

Option 2.
While Zhalia is warming up to the idea of being pregnant, I don't think she's really ready to want to be pregnant. As a reader, I'd love to see option 1; however, I think that option 2 is more appropriate.
Option 3 I think would happen if she had someone with her.

d99d4 No.6841

option 1

bd506 No.6843

Option 1 for sure

60c81 No.6845

I already voted, so this is more of a chat thing.

Might be a bit early, but I think we should plot out our next moves in regards to Elos. We now are at the required preggophilia to have a roll in the hay with Elos. Holly was screwed by Sole, and I imagine Elos will be little different.

With that in mind, I think our next move after this choice should be to go back to Elos, and bargain to get more questions from him. The wording of our deal should be very tight.

Something similar to "You will assist me on my journey around this strange land, the minute we have sex." Just a shot in the dark, some others probably have better ideas.

31dee No.6846

>>6839
I vote the same as this person.

46579 No.6848

>>6828
I vote for this

f12b2 No.6849

While I want to vote option 3, facing down packs of jackals by herself is way too much to expect of Zahlia. I would rather not get pregnant until we figure out more that's going on around here.

With that in mind, I vote for option 2. I'm pretty curious to see who Markus's friends are and learn about whoever cut off his junk.

Thanks for the shout out Taco.

0ef43 No.6857

Option two. It's too early to start filling up like this, we barely know who they are.

5fde1 No.6861

Option 1

ce496 No.6874

From the sound of it, the jackals need a sent to track her. So I'm really down for her to search the city. Plus I want her to find more items. But the next reasonable step is to check the stables.

So Option 2 and then try to explore the city

8b4ac No.6877

option 1

d7667 No.6893

Option 1

ee546 No.6898

Option 1

f4d36 No.6904

option 1

cb3ff No.6905

Option 1

dd004 No.6915

Option 1

e2e89 No.6916

I'm closing the vote, needless to say that option 1 got the most votes.

I will probably make it a bit harder in the future to get knocked up, the people who voted against it actually had some really good points RP wise.
However, this is being done democratically so option 1 it is.
(No worries for the people who voted for option 1, I won't make it nigh impossible either. This is a fetish forum after all.)

e2e89 No.6936

Just a bit of a headsup.
I obviously wasn't able to make the next part yesterday, today might be the same case.
I will try to complete it in the evening, but since this weekend is very busy for me there is a chance you'll only get to see it next Monday.
My apologies for the delay.

e2e89 No.6942

I got some rather unpleasant news to share I'm afraid.
This week is going to be just as busy as the weekend was for me, so I'm going to have to put the next deadline for myself on coming Monday.
Currently I simply have too many obligations to take care of which take up all my time and are keeping me from writing the next part.
Normally I would just spread the story out over a few days and slowly chip away at it, but this one will probably be for many, if not for everyone, the most interesting one so far.
Therefore, I want to put in a good chunk of time and write it in one go to make sure it's of good quality, instead of doing small pieces at a time and possibly make mistakes or break cohesion of the story.
Next week most of my obligations will have been taken care of and it should be business as usual again.
My opologies in advance, but on the bright side that does mean you will have 2 stories in one week next time.
Of course, it is always possible that I do manage to find a few hours I have nothing to do and will write it then, so do keep an eye on the topic.

984a2 No.6992

This dead?

e3c4d No.6993

I'm under the impression that Golden Taco is to be assumed busy until further notice. So I'd give him another week or so

e3c4d No.6994

I also missed that he said by Monday, so Probably check back tomorrow

984a2 No.6995

He said Monday almost two weeks ago

e2e89 No.7003

Hello guys,
It has been a while hasn't it?
As a short answer to if this story is dead I can say: No!
I fully intend to continue the story, however there is currently one problem.
In short, I'm just extremely busy.
The longer version is that there are 2 reasons I'm extremely busy.
Those reasons I prefer not to share with the internet as they are rather personal, but one takes up a massive amount of my time and the other causes a lot of inconvenience which in turn becomes rather time consuming as well.

I really hate to say it which is also why I've been rather silent, but chances are I'll have to shelve this CYOA until halfway next month.
On the bright side in one and a half month I'll be sitting next to a pool somewhere in the caribbean, during which I'd say there is plenty of time to crank out these parts.
Quite a few times I've tried to sit down and work on the next part for a few hours, but either something else comes up or I'm too fed up with my obligations (which are quite similar) to work on this.
I sincerely apologize for this, I wish I could have made my previous deadlines, but sometimes life likes to get in the way.

Lastly, if you guys want to continue this CYOA earlier (which I fully understand), there is another way.
I am willing to hand over the story to someone else on a few conditions.
Firstly, Someone will have to volunteer, preferably someone with some experience with CYOA's or writing.
Secondly, that someone will need the support from a large group of the others involved.
Now, if no one steps up or if you guys prefer to keep me as the writer then I promise that I will try to find a some time to write, the uploads however will be on a irregular basis with sometimes a lot of time inbetween if I can find time at all.
The reason I started this CYOA was to give back to a community I've been part of for a while now, however if stepping back and letting someone take over will contribute more then I fully support that.

Let me know what you guys think.

45757 No.7004

>>7003
I'd honestly rather you stay in charge, but you COULD delegate the writing to someone else for a while. Give them a quick outline, let them write and send to you for proofing, and you post with credit.
If you'd rather not/can't, then I'd be happy to wait until you can get back in the saddle.



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