Oh, and I love foxes to!
So what's this comic about anyways?
Well it's the story of the members of a bloodline and the events through their lives, basically jjba but different
To be honest, I do so a lot of improvements over your old drawing.
In my opinion, I think the eyes look alright. I also do believe her cheeks are too big, but it mainly has to do with the position of the nose. I suggest you grab a scratch sheet of paper, and try to sketch her face with her nose lowered. You might need to move her eyes down too.
Your skill at drawing clothes is real good. Other than that, its real good!
Thank you I will take it into consideration the next time, because I'm coming with more