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File: 1502605445905.jpg (3.25 MB, 4208x2368, WP_20170812_21_16_44_Pro.jpg)

80649 No.31698

So, now I'll leave it as one thread for every one to come and give me your criticism of my work.
We now start with this one inspired on the request I asked for
So what'd you think?

77f97 No.31701

>>31698
Very nice view and nicely done preggo in your style. She looks really hot that i wanna rub her belly. ^^

80649 No.31703

>>31701
Jaja thank you I put a lot of work onto it

a1155 No.31704

>>80649
What other fetishes do you like to incorporate into your art, when it comes to pregnancy?

a1155 No.31705

Beautiful preggo!
Her tits and belly look very cute. I like the imagination you put when deciding her lingerine:3

80649 No.31706

>>31704
Well I don't have something special for it, just lingering I guess, every thing else is when I'm on the mood

80649 No.31710

>>31705
Thanks, and the lingering was a little bit easy just got the image on my mind, don a bit of research and place it on the draw. Its not such a complex process

2bbde No.31711

Nice work. You might want to move the eyes down slightly.

Just so you know, the word for sexy underwear is lingerie. lingering means to last for a long time. Also, what does jaja mean? Are you saying "yes" twice in German? I'm not trying to be rude.

80649 No.31712

>>31711
Sorry my bad my mother language isn't English and I'm getting help of the autocorrect tool
And jaja is an expression for laught.

2bbde No.31713

>>31712
It's okay, I've made much sillier mistakes while practicing my Japanese, such as using the the word for constipated instead of the one for healthy…

So are you Spanish or from the Americas?

80649 No.31716

>>31713
Americas, Mexico to be more specific

2bbde No.31717

>>31716
Ah, so the other United States. It's a bit late, but welcome, to wherever here is.

I just noticed that her face looks like someone who's mad that her partner hasn't made her cum yet.

80649 No.31718

>>31717
Thanks for the welcome. Her face is more because she isn't supposed to be there in the first place, you know what I'm trying to say?

2bbde No.31719

>>31718
I understand you. I was just making my own backstory.

80649 No.31722

>>31719
Well I won't stop you so

a9cd0 No.31725

Well it's really good :)
Keep it up and don't forget to practice ;)

80649 No.31728

>>31725
Thanks I will

80649 No.31766

File: 1502692446820.jpg (3.29 MB, 4208x2368, WP_20170813_21_30_40_Pro.jpg)

There is todays one to.
And those who want backstory, she was kidnapped

2bbde No.31767

>>31766
Very nice. You definitely improved on the face. I don't know if it's because of the underwear, but it looks like her belly is hanging very low.

80649 No.31768

>>31767
Maybe it really is hanging very low

126c2 No.31770

File: 1502712360481.png (148.74 KB, 768x768, image.png)

I love helping other artists :D

Anyway, if there's one thing I suggest you work on is your head to body proportions. I'm not sure if it's your art style or not but I find your head and neck to be a little bit on the larger side. Try narrowing your neck a little. How I go about it is usually having it at most the width of your shoulder to the neck. It shouldn't be shorter than the width of your neck.

As for heads, your first picture nailed it somewhat but not so your second picture. Proportions are what you need to focus on. A torso (shoulder to hips) should be about two to three heads tall or something along those lines. (I'm still not an expert so I'm still learning myself xD)

Anyway, treat this as a gift for trying hard as an artist :D as far as tips go, try learning basics like anatomy or basic building blocks on YouTube. Good luck!!

80649 No.31778

>>31770
I knew it that the head was a little of, thank for the tips.

80649 No.31793

File: 1502779367078.jpg (3.14 MB, 4208x2368, WP_20170814_20_52_13_Pro.jpg)

So, I've been reading this book of anatomy written by Andrew Loomis and this is my first practice, what do you think?

2bbde No.31795

>>31793
While her head is too small, and the neck is a little too thick, the body itself is good.

I still think the cheeks are too big, but I guess I'm just used to anime characters with giant foreheads.

I'm curious, can you show another drawing where we can see her hands?

80649 No.31796

File: 1502782559933.jpg (1.49 MB, 1424x1424, a4d.jpg)

>>31795
Ok, head to small and neck to thick.
Of course I cab, next one will have the hands visible.
I couldn't help not to think of kira reading about the hands haha

80649 No.31798

File: 1502785155065.jpg (2.89 MB, 4208x2368, WP_20170815_03_15_42_Pro.jpg)

Another one, and this was really quick, if the pose looks a little bit strange its because I take it from JJBA

2bbde No.31799

>>31798
Yeah, definitely continue to practice drawing hands. It's probably the hardest part of a human to draw well.

80649 No.31800

>>31799
Right, ia the hardest, but still it have its tricks

80649 No.31804

File: 1502790893082.jpg (1.05 MB, 2365x2323, WP_20170815_04_50_57_Pro (….jpg)

Please no!

80649 No.31847

>>31804
What do you think?

2bbde No.31853

>>31804
Probably the best one overall. Belly has kind of a weird shape though. Too long, maybe?

80649 No.31855

>>31853
Maybe is that

3482f No.31859

File: 1502854223322.jpg (959.49 KB, 2365x2323, Untitled.jpg)

Yup

80649 No.31862

>>31859
Well, I'll make it better next time

80649 No.31874

File: 1502881259002.jpg (2.59 MB, 4208x2368, WP_20170816_05_36_59_Pro.jpg)

So I decided to turn this into a sequence drawing story.
The back story until now is that, she was kidnapped and her captor used her to extortion, and he went even further as to amputate her right arm.
I know this sound like the story writted by somebody who's really crazy, but this is just a fiction

80649 No.31900

Do you think I shouldn't do this?

2bbde No.31903

>>31900
It's your story, do what you want to.

Just remember to ask yourself how does this advance the plot and character progression. For example, does the extortion and amputation help build her as a character, or is it there just to shock people?

Let me know if there is anything you don't understand. I can try to explain things simpler.

80649 No.31904

>>31903
Actually writting is my main field, actually all the incident is a build up to the character fear of her life before the event, it makes her grew separated from the people who she think can involve her in a similar situation

80649 No.32016

File: 1503159125486.jpg (3.28 MB, 4208x2368, WP_20170518_18_38_50_Pro.jpg)

Hey look this one is from half a year ago, very noticeable the change isn't it

2bbde No.32029

>>32016
Yes, I'd say so.

126c2 No.32033

My best advice at the moment is to follow your favourite artists. Be exposed and draw references from them. If your art style is not yet solid, I suggest this exercise. Try copying some of their works. Not trace. Copy. Try studying their art and way of thinking a little more. Also don't just copy from a single artist. Copy from multiple artists. It really helped me solidify my own art style and hopefully it will for you too!

Oh and if you want to follow me, I'll be on yoshyoshyosh123.deviantart.com if you need me *shamelessselfpromotioncoughshamelessselfpromotion*

a9cd0 No.32038

>>32033
Haha i do the same thing but i copied more than one artist and combine them to make my own style ;)

80649 No.32068

>>32033
I always do that, the most resent artist Itale inspiration is Hirohiko Araki because I lile his dynamic poses

a9cd0 No.32077

>>32068
So,you like JJBA?

016ac No.32085

>>32077 A lot, because is that kind of anime/manga that isn't afraid of being themselves and does what it wants



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