Definitely better. I think her eyes are a little small for her face size, or her cheeks are just too big. Also, it looks like her tail isn't connected to her body.
Just so you know, if you're going to keep posting your own drawings for critique you should keep them all in one thread.
You are right, the eyes are a bit of, and I knew that the tail wasn't fine, thanks for highlighting it, oh and I'll make it just one threath next time thanks for the advice.
Hi! I just came here because I like foxes, but do you have a link to your older drawing? I'd be more than happy to provide constructive criticism.
Oh, and I love foxes to!
So what's this comic about anyways?
Well it's the story of the members of a bloodline and the events through their lives, basically jjba but different
To be honest, I do so a lot of improvements over your old drawing.
In my opinion, I think the eyes look alright. I also do believe her cheeks are too big, but it mainly has to do with the position of the nose. I suggest you grab a scratch sheet of paper, and try to sketch her face with her nose lowered. You might need to move her eyes down too.
Your skill at drawing clothes is real good. Other than that, its real good!
Thank you I will take it into consideration the next time, because I'm coming with more