I like the first one - but thats just my opinion.
I would think it may be pertinent to have a re-cap on the story briefly, and some character intro(s), next.
Psst! (I think there are eraser particles on the paper… brush before scanning)
What happens is that Fei and Elly gets caught whilst infiltrating Solaris after hearing of their friends possibly being captured. Elhaym offers herself up to save Fei and the others.
This then escalates to Elly being on trial for treason with her sentence being that she will partake in the Malakh Plan otherwise known as the M Project.
She is then stripped of her clothing and then strapped to a medical table where she is pumped up with hormones which increases her muscle mass as well as her breasts. Her vagina is then injected with nanites to increase elasticity and tightness almost on command.
She is then taken to a room escorted by armed guards to be raped by a genetically engineered monstrosity called a Wels. Its reproductive organs being tailor made to impregnate Elly with an alien baby of sorts.
Elly is then forced to carry it to term and give birth.
The orderlies molest and rape her especially just before her inevitable birth. With them wanting to rub one out before Elly's vagina gets "ruined".
And this is pretty much the outline for the plot of my fanfic/doujin.
Neat character/creature design.
I made it deliberate and my drawing of the King Crimson Stand from JoJo helped me get the expression right.
I had to look up Xenogears Perfect Works to get a picture of the Sufal since the Wikia does not have a picture of it.
The damn thing here was even more hung before I lowered the dick size.
Well,made it less like it was an entire head going into Elly when she gets raped.
I mean what is the point of birth if the dick stretches the vagina out like a head?
is the alien baby of deus going to be a Jesus allegory?
You could say that the scene of Elly giving birth is a fucked up version of the Nativity Scene.
In my doujin,Elly gets pregnant 12 times.
The 1st child being the Deus baby she gives birth to and then there are the 8 children she bears with the entire Gazel Ministry so that the Ministry can get new bodies.
There is the child she and Fei would have had but was miscarried when the Deus of Mahanon was killed and then Elly has a child with Krelian who guilted Elly into having sex with him seeing how Fei had found out about Elly and her giving birth to other kids and how Elly feels she cannot be with Fei any more and 1 more kid this time finally with Fei as she promised that she would bear him his child.
Just a thought; you may want to setup a Artist's Gallery on e-hentai.org
for your assorted work
Hmmmmm. I have thought about that or Hentai-Foundry.
I am practically a no name upstart to be honest.
Now with Shadows, Nice!
P.S. could you add names to the uploaded images; even if its 'WIP#42'…?
Firstly, that is a digital drawing medium (digitizer/tablet).
You are comparing DIFFERENT mediums, Apples != Oranges.
Secondly, your drawings have 300% more detail. Yes, they are a little fuzzy - still I think they could be fineliner traced…
You should draw more of the support characters, Krellian, Fei, Miyah et al. (different angles, and poses too!)
Try drawing in that alternate 'style', you may learn something.
It is just wouldn't it be more prudent to try and copy Kunihiko Tanaka's art style at first to get a better grasp at drawing said characters?
That and Elly in that drawing does look a bit more cute than sexy.
Sorry I haven't been able update much.
A lot of stuff going on at home and even during my down time when I am drawing I am having issues finishing them.
I will try to upload something very soon.
*Hrm* I'd suggest to think about where those legs are. (clipping)
Drawing positions is a new thing for me.
I am having an issue on making them work out.
Yeah, its done using your old 'style'.>>46065
Wondering when you would show up.
The muscled legs look so off now.
I will be using the massive amount of sweat for the new one though I do wonder if I should work on the pic I am redoing to have Elly sweat as well to add continuity.
Coming along nicely.
Um, I swear there are like 43 W.I.P. Pics. Numbering these would also be good!
Also where do they go in the comic, if this would be part of it?
I was thinking of cropping this a bit to have a baisc view of the room and what is going on. But mostly it is for reference sake.