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6c229 No.56352

Time for thread 5.

Here's the old thread >>39082
Here's a pastebin of the story in the old thread.
https://pastebin.com/Y5kMEr7F

Dedicated chat thread to offload off-topic and OOC chatter: >>>/c/8853

I still haven't done any error checking on either of the first four threads. Once I do that, I'll also archive the old threads and add links to the pastebin. In the meantime, you can use archive.org
Thread 1: https://web.archive.org/web/20170612190855/http://pregchan.com/d/res/11128.html
Thread 2: https://web.archive.org/web/20170612183649/https://www.pregchan.com/d/res/24451.html#24451
Thread 3 (Archive.org doesn't have the last few bits of the thread, use the pastebin version of thread three for the end of the thread): https://web.archive.org/web/20171204013723/http://www.pregchan.com/d/res/28802.html
Thread 4: https://web.archive.org/web/20190416153907/https://pregchan.com/d/res/39082.html

Stat sheet as of the end of episode 4:
https://pastebin.com/6vz0AE7s

We're just past the halfway point of episode 5.

6c229 No.56354

>>56352
A quick infodump for those new to the game:

This is a quest, you vote on the actions of the main character, namely Chiba Mamoru, aka. Tuxedo Kamen. The two halves of his personality have not been united, and neither know about the other half.

I'm the QM, so I control all the other characters and the world around you.

The story is a massive crossover of Sailor Moon (mixing and matching between the manga/Crystal timeline, and the original anime), Futari wa PreCure, Futari wa PreCure Splash Star, CardCaptor Sakura, Lyrical Nanoha, and two more series that have not been revealed. One was blatantly hinted at and correctly guessed, and the other was also correctly guessed, even though everyone completely ignored the plot flag that I had set to hint about that series.

Read the pastebin!
https://pastebin.com/u/Moe_Overload

Ways to contact me if pregchan goes down again:
Twitter: https://twitter.com/Questing_Moe
Gab: https://gab.com/Moe
Fiction.live: https://fiction.live/user/moe.overload
asstr (the comment form is broken, but my email is at the bottom of each chapter): https://www.asstr.org/~Moe_Overload/
f-list: https://www.f-list.net/c/Tuxedo%20Kamen

6c229 No.56355

Comment to be deleted when this thread is full.

6c229 No.56357

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You march forward and caustically state, "The bus they were on decided to lift off and flew into a black hole and poof, vanished." You make a hand gesture as you say 'poof'.

The women are in a state of shock. One of them breaks the silence and chides you. "How can you joke about that when this woman has lost her daughter.

"Because you're being hysterical and accusing people without any proof. If her daughter is missing, go to the police, not to a fortune teller." You glare into the eyes of each of the three women in turn, then point to the stairs leading down to the street, "Now go."

Whether they've agreed with your logic, or just acquiesced to your forceful order, the three women leave.

Usagi fumes, "That's so mean of her. She's just like the woman that yelled at you yesterday."

"Since I was little, people looked at me coldly because I have mysterious powers. Why was I born with such powers? And now when I need them, I can't use them."

"Rei, I'll help you find Mii."

"Thank you, Usagi. But neither of you should be involved with me anymore. I'll only bring you misfortune." Rei turns around and walks back into the shrine.

"Wait!" You call out, but she enters the shrine and you can hear the door lock behind her.

"There's nothing we can do now." Usagi states sadly, and her cat seems to meow in agreement. She turns to leave.


What do you do?
>Stop Usagi and speak with her. [About what?]
>Knock on the shrine doors until Rei comes back out.
>Explore the outside of the shrine.
>Head out with Usagi.
>Find a position where you can stake out the bus without being seen.
>Write-in. [What?]

54b3d No.56362

>>56357
I think 2 might just piss Rei off. I remember that underneath the Shrine Maiden persona is a giant tsundere.

I'm thinking a combination of 4 and 1, but I can't think of what to talk to her about.

ae27c No.56375

>>56362
Me also, but we can just walk with her for now. Option 4.

82b27 No.56376

>>56357
Option 2 is just a good way to piss Rei off, yeah. It's pretty much the Usagi Move, which rarely goes over well with her.

Part of me really wants to look around, but we might as well see if we can talk with Usagi a little. I guess we can do Option 4, but I also have something suggest for talking about her: Ask her how her little group of friends are doing.

54b3d No.56380

>>56376
Yeah that seems like a good subject

957bd No.56415

>>56357
Okay, this could be my own issues with depression and empathy influencing me, especially since the bus episode is basically right around the corner, but I'm voting for option one:

Stop Usagi and say "Wait, we can't just leave. We know she didn't do anything wrong, and I really don't think she should be alone right now; not when she feels so vulnerable. We should at least tell her we don't believe she's bad luck, and we want to help."

Being an orphan, Mamoru knows loneliness and isolation, especially with so little memory of his past. This is what, in canon, made him so compassionate toward Chibi-Usa. And it won't hurt that Usagi and Luna will see how much we care in general.

54b3d No.56416

>>56415
Hmm, could work, but I'm not sure how Rei would respond.

ae27c No.56426

>>56415
>>56416
I also like this idea, but we also don't know if Rei will hear us through the door. Hm… I'll change my vote to this.

957bd No.56435

>>56426
Even if Rei can't hear, at least we tried before we have to move on, right? :-)

68a32 No.56571

Votes:
>>56376
Blue: Your add-on to Neal's original vote.

>>56415
>>56426
Fem and Shadow: Fem's vote.

>>56416
Neal: Are you voting for your original idea with Blue's add-on, or Fem's idea?

54b3d No.56577

>>56571
hmm

I was originally planning on sticking with my original idea but I think I'll switch to Fem's and shadow's idea so we don't have to deal with a tie breaker.

6c229 No.56580

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>>56577
"Wait, we can't just leave. We know she didn't do anything wrong, and I really don't think she should be alone right now; not when she feels so vulnerable. We should at least tell her we don't believe she's bad luck, and we want to help."

Usagi brightens up at the suggestion, "Yes!" She runs up to the door, cradling her cat in one arm, and pounds on the door, "Rei, Rei!"

You catch up with her and motion for her stop, "Rei, you don't have to come out if you don't want to, but neither of us believe you're bad luck, or that you're responsible for Mii's disappearance. We want to help."

You press your finger to your lips, telling Usagi to be really quiet. You press your ear against the door and listen closely. You can just barely make out breathing on the other side of the door. It's safe to say that Rei is right there.


How do you wrap all of this up in a nice bow?
>Write-in for massive relationship boost. [What?]

96bd4 No.56581

Hmm…what else do we know, or have we experienced, with Rei so far? Maybe mentioning something about her being dutiful or kind with her crows and explicitly tying that back to something like "No bad person would have such a good heart."
I don't know. Something like that.

54b3d No.56584

>>56581
We haven't had too many personal experiences with Rei yet, so there's not exactly a lot to work with here, but I do have an idea though it's a little rough.

>>56580
"When we first met and I purchased that fortune strip from you, you confided in me about how worried you were about the people disappearing. Your concern spoke volumes to me that day, and showed me what kind of person you are. A terrible person would have brushed off the disappearances but instead you've been tearing yourself up inside over them. Don't let one woman's paranoia break your spirit."

"Usagi and I are going to be investigating the bus stop soon and we could use your help. Your sixth sense might help us reveal what's truly going on down there. Besides, it'll be a chance to prove those assholes wrong and It'll feel good to be able to rub it in their faces that the person they were blaming was the one who rescued their kids."

4b6fd No.56593

>>56584
Yeah, I'm not going to think of something better than this. XD I support it.

54b3d No.56600

>>56593
Still wouldn't mind someone could help refine it though.

82b27 No.56613

>>56600
Give me a day or two.

c5d0d No.56649

>>56584
Nealend's the man with the plan this time. Let's go for it.

96bd4 No.56658

>>56584
Yeah, that's way better than what I had cooked up, but in my defense, I was really tired.

c5d0d No.56686

>>56658
We all have those days, dude. No worries about it, yeah?

82b27 No.56893

>>56584
Yeah, I haven't had much time to try and look at this game lately, and honestly there isn't a whole lot that I'd change with this. Looks good.

6c229 No.57069

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"When we first met and I purchased that fortune strip from you, you confided in me about how worried you were about the people disappearing. Your concern spoke volumes to me that day, and showed me what kind of person you are. A terrible person would have brushed off the disappearances but instead you've been tearing yourself up inside over them. Don't let one woman's paranoia break your spirit."

"Usagi and I are going to be investigating the bus stop soon and we could use your help. Your sixth sense might help us reveal what's truly going on down there. Besides, it'll be a chance to prove those assholes wrong and It'll feel good to be able to rub it in their faces that the person they were blaming was the one who rescued their kids."

For a moment there's silence. You Usagi, fidgeting, the girl barely able to sit still without talking, and then a voice comes from the other side, "Thank you, but I have to go." You can make out the footsteps as she enters deeper into the shrine.

Did you succeed, did you fail? You don't know. "Let's go, Usagi. We did what we can. I hope it's enough."

You head down the shrine stairs with Usagi in tow. What do you talk about.


>You know, You're right. Rei is beautiful.

>I hope she can find the strength to pull through.
>Is that girl that got hit in the head by a soccer ball OK? Her name was Sakura, right?
>Did you and your friends organize something of a detective club? Whose idea was that?
>Write-ing [What?]

54b3d No.57071

>>57069
I vote for option 4.

1f596 No.57072

>>57069
Option three, I guess.

82b27 No.57088

>>57069
Combination 3-4 with a dash of write-in. "I noticed you and your friends the other day… training, I think? Is that girl who got hit by the soccer ball alright? Sakura, I believe her name was. She didn't have any obvious injuries when I looked her over, but things like head injuries don't always show signs right away. Still, you girls and your little detective club are pretty cute to watch. Whose idea was that, anyway?"

c3bc6 No.57109

Option 4 please. The safest option without hurting her pride, and getting us closer to being part of that 'detective group' which will get us closer to everyone. And hopefully to our memories.



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