assuming this is here as last thread is full, tried to post stuff and 'limit esceeded'
Bumpy Wish recently released this hyper pregnancy piece. Young Weird has a nice enough design, but is so often anthro, so it's nice to see her as a true pony, and to see more true pony in general.
What do you think about hyper pregnancy? This is actually about my limit, if not a little over my limit. I like a big, wide mare, but they can't even walk at these sizes. However, this can play into their having wings. A pegasus so pregnant she needs a cloud to rest on so she can fly around is pretty hot. This can be taken further and pegasi could be considered ridiculously fertile in some cases, but that conflicts with the common thoughts about Earth ponies, so it would need to be balanced.
Still, I don't think I'd like bigger than this, although I need to actually see to judge each time.
My first story in this new thread is my last story of this old year. This is a Hearth's Warming story, inspired by a prompt I asked for, and which I've greatly elaborated upon.
I don't intend to release any new stories this year, but I may revise some of my older work, to eliminate typos and other minor errors I noticed after publishing, or I may not.
I hope you enjoy it. Happy Hearth's Warming. The only gift I'd like is to read your thoughts on this and my other stories, if you'd provide them. I understand that writing good feedback can be challenging in itself, but I'd be elated to know what your favourite aspects of my work are, or what you'd care to see more of, or other relevant things.
My goal for this year was to write at least twelve stories, an average of once a month, but I only met half of that. I'll just try harder with next year, however. I have several stories at various stages of completion, so I'm much better prepared this time around. There are so many nice ideas I can turn into pregnant pony prose that I want to work on.
These are real nice! Your colorings are pretty good.
Not a fan of hyper personally, but the art style overall is really cute
These are nice. Usually, I prefer human colours over Equestria Girls, but that's not the case here. Fluttershy's yellow belly is just begging for a hand.
>That was actually made by me back in the day
In that case, welcome back. We seem to have a lot of people returning after a long absence.>>15990
Removing the tentacles really improved this piece.
I saw you looking for sketches to colour in the /mlp/ thread, so I'll suggest some here. I don't see any risk of Patch colouring and refining these any time soon. The last one in particular is smaller, and having a higher-resolution version would be nice.
I was disappointing too.
But If I was Eris from the land of Equestria, I will get sucked in that hole from the brick wall in the alley, I'll be TFing as her.
Once I've become Eris, I can do anything I want, even using the 'New Life' spell on myself, so I can be pregnant with twins.
Well, January was a bust for me. I want to claim I'll try to release another story with this month, to make up for that, but this is the same pattern of events from last year, so I shouldn't. I'll start working on next month's story instead. I'm still going to aim for an average of one story for each remaining month, but I'll be glad with more than the six I wrote with last year.
This story is humanized, but not Equestria Girls, and I don't intend to write more of these anytime soon, but was inspired by this image from Forfun41; when I'd first seen it, I'd immediately expected the description to contain the idea presented in the story, but it didn't, so that was the inspiration. I feel that I wrote a much better characterization of Pinkie Pie here, than with my last story; I found that I'd written some good scenarios with her here, but didn't want to just recycle them for that other, and it may have suffered for that.
I started writing this in last November, intending for it to be a shorter story, and to help me get out of a rut I'd been in; it worked for that but, as I continued writing, I couldn't allow myself to leave it short, so I expanded it into what I'm releasing now. While I believe I really took too long to finish this, as I did very little writing in January, I also have a longer story I started back in 2019, so it's really not so bad. I expect to finish that one this year, as well.
I've taken some criticism I've received to heart, and the only particularly-noticeable playful alliteration is at the very beginning. I do other, more subtle wordplay in my writings, but it seems the alliteration is what's noticed the most. If any of you have praise for certain qualities of how I write, criticisms instead, or other comments, I'd as always be very glad to read them.
This is kind of a shot in the dark, but does anyone have a story that used to be on deviantart? Unfortunately I don't remember the author's name, but the ponies were transported to a different realm where their pregnancies were tied to a big clock.
I think it's MrCandyMan007 who wrote the story.
I always enjoy revisiting this piece. It may be Patch's best underappreciated work; I got it from his tumblr page years ago, and it doesn't seem to have been uploaded to any of the pony boorus.
Rainbow Dash's outfit is nice, and tight-fitting, but neither pants nor shirt can obscure her foal-filled belly that steals all of the attention. It's both the pose and the angle which make this simple sketch one of my favourites from him. The way he draws pony legs works here to emphasize just how large she is as they cradle it. The popped belly button and slight linea nigra add surprising depth, and I find myself imagining how tight her womb is, because it certainly looks tight. Rainbow Dash oozes confidence and looks so inviting, due to her outfit and facial expression.
It's truly a shame this never received the colour and shading it deserves, but I still like it even over some of his elaborated work. It so well captures what I like, and I believe is unlike any of his other work in pose, angle, anatomy, and outfit.
Here's some original work of best pone from my friend that I colored. Let us know what you think!
I'm also gunna shill my dA because there's also a non-preg version of this pic in the discription, and we're also planning to eventually draw a pic of each of the mane 6:https://www.deviantart.com/thenypod4/art/Flutter-Preg-875520930
Very nice job coloring and tell your friend that I like his style.
Can't wait for the others.
Are there more pregnant pics of Aryanne?
It has been too long since I've finished a story. It's the seventh month, but this is only my second story. I wanted to have this finished for Mayternity, but technical issues got in my way, and I kept allowing the release date to slip. I'm terrible without a deadline I don't control. I'd like to see at least one pregnant pony pack this year, be it for Nightmare Night, Hearth's Warming, or something else, and I'd prefer if my work weren't the only piece therein which isn't anthro. Still, I shouldn't have too much trouble writing four or five more stories before the year ends. As always, I'm open to trades.
Anyway, this is a Trixie story, very loosely inspired by this image from Forfun41. When I saw it, I imagined so many different contexts it could have, and went from there. I have several stories in-progress, and occasionally start new stories when I have issues, and this is one such story. It was intended to be small, but grew to a decent size as I continued work on it. I had fun playing with the different tenses between scenes. This story shares a theme with a Celestia story I'd planned long before seeing the image, but this underlying theme won't become clear until I finish and release both.
Amusingly, I only recently noticed Trixie has crotchboobs in the image. I weighed crotchboobs and teats as I wrote this, before noticing, and considered writing alternative versions using each. Unfortunately, there's not much to write about teats in comparison, and that alternative version is largely subtractive. If anyone wants it, let me know, and I'll try to have it within the month.
I'd love to get any feedback, but please write something substantial. While I enjoy reading that people liked reading my story, telling me this doesn't tell me much else.
I'll see if I can give a better review when it's not almost 10pm and I'm not in the middle of a melancholic fit.