Came up with this a while ago, might as well share it
It was a cold night outside, when Princess Peach invited Mario over for dinner. After the festivities, Peach took Mario down to her 'special room' for some fun. When they arrived, Peach said 'Ready for some fun, Mario?' He nodded, thinking they were gonna find a movie to watch. Right then and there, Peach stripped naked. 'It's about time we had sex again.' Mario's eyes widened from the sight of her naked body; the bangin' ass, the immensely fuckable pussy, and she seemed bustier than he had remembered. Mario also stripped naked. They wasted no time with the preamble and got straight to the action. Mario began by rubbing his erect penis on Peach's clitoris. She let out some small moans. 'Mm! Ahh!' Afterwards, he decided to get to the good stuff. Without warning (although she probably should have expected this), Mario penetrated her pussy. She let out a huge moan. 'Aaaaaaaaaaah!' Mario began to slide his dick in and out of Peach's wet vagina. Peach began to blush, and was getting wetter. Mario's penis began to react too, and started filling with semen. 'Ohhh… Don't stop, Mario!' He began to thrust faster, giving Peach even more pleasure. She started to blush even more, and was now so wet that she was leaking. He went faster and faster, and grabbed Peach's breasts. 'Oh? Playing with my boobs? Go on, don't stop! Aaaaaaahh….' He started spinning them around, while thrusting very frequently. Both Mario and Peach were near orgasm. Mario telegraphed that he was about to cum. 'Do it. Cum inside my vagina. Impregnate me! Give me a baby!' Then, Mario came. Peach let out a very big moan. 'Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhnnn!' Mario pulled out, as some of the semen pooled onto the sheets. A few seconds after pulling out, Peach felt something. 'Mario… Something's coming! Right then, she squirted. 'Ooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhnnnnn!!' They were both panting. 'Oh Mario, that was great! Why don't we do this more often~?' Peach said. Mario nodded in agreement, and they both cuddled together. 'You're the best, Mario.' Said Peach. Meanwhile, a race was going on inside of Peach. Millions of sperm cells were released into her. As she was ovulating, the sperm went through her cervix, and a female sperm penetrated the egg. Mario and Peach were going to have a daughter.
So, what did you think?
Fantastic, I'd like to see it continue. :)
I think it's kind of a rudimentary writing style that mostly just went from action to action without much transition. I couldn't really get into the moment, because the next moment happened far too quickly.
So, if you slow it down a bit and put certain other things into it, this could become a good story :)
Just sayin', if someone could draw this, that'd be lovely.
You don't have to, but I'd appreciate if you did.